The Lake

Description

Wherever her skin touches his, ice spreads, cold and numbing. It creeps from his hands, his lips, from his feet where they touch the water, all the way to his heart until it is no longer his.

Foreword

A gothic story I wrote for an English assignment, where I replaced the names with Korean idols. And the lovely, amazing, beautiful, gorgeous, keyboard-smash worthy poster and background comes from the Ahjussi & Chicken Graphic Shop because who else makes posters this awesome?

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wintress
#1
Chapter 1: Loved it! Very nice plot!
iiSarang #2
Wow O: its so detailed, so full of emotions and you can feel her despair, her longing, her loneliness...and the moment she took his life and emerging from the waters to stare at the old woman its like she's saying He's Mine Now with like a smirk of evil...LOL wow I love it!
jongsicafrver
#3
i was confused i don't get it.....oh well.........
boredbluejay #4
Oooh....very creepy! It made me shiver. I loved the part where Jessica drowns him...that probably says a lot about me.
Wait, they're related here?! Hm...that makes things a little weird...
Great job, Smiley! Another fantastic fic!
boredbluejay #5
Oh my gosh, the poster looks like it could be for a movie. It's beautiful!
Now to actually read...
kirakira-
#6
I like the spookiness of this. Keep up the good work^^
missywell
#7
this is great.
spooky but great.
you should write more like this :)
nerdscandy #8
Oh my GOSHHH
This is so unique!!! It's not about jongsica love but more of revenge.... So depressing but enlightening at the same time somehow :)
I hope I'm not scared of lakes from now on though :P
Btw I loved this <3
Hayoung_Lee
#9
Nice ~