Chapter 1: :'(
saaaaaaaaaadd..
although you story can improve a lot more in terms of grammar, construction and whatnot, i must say that I ENJOYED READING it. seriously.
the transition from positive to negative emotions was, for me, realistic and heartfelt. GOOD JOB! YULSUNG FTW! and although, im not a fan of sad endings, i AM a big fan, a shipper of this couple.. not that anyone cares, HAHAHA! :D but i really liked this, it's imperfectly perfect just like the couple you are writing about!
/wink
CONGRATS, AUTHOR-NIM!
Aigoo, such as unexpected story! I bet this yulsung fanfic... But...
Jongwoon ah, i can feel ur feeling T_T its really hurs, rite? >.<
Ah, make a sequel plizz
yuri pov ^^
i just wants to know why she's ignore him T_T *forever delusional fangirl
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