I love how you use the technique of symbolism in this story. I also love Amber and Myungsoo's characters ^^
It's short, but very meaningful. I love stories with symbolism and some things to learns from :)

Is the trampoline at Myungsoo's house? Because it says Lee's backyard?

Up there, it should be "if I could pause time, I would CHOOSE..."

Wow. The pacing/flow was just right for a one shot. And it is well-written ^-^ Good job!

hey me love this fiction
more MyunBer fic pls

This is such an adorable story :D
I third nanahime's comment ;D

'It's gonna be an awesome oneshot'; that was what I think of when reading the foreword and it really is now that I finish reading it. I believe most of us, (teenagers) can relate to this quite well for we have those days where we hope that time would stop and put everything on hold.

Anyway, I actually didn't ship Myungsoo with anyone but I kinda like this pairing, partly because Amber is one of my girl biases! (:

I second Nanahime's statement!

We need more MyunBer fic~!

This one shot was beautiful. <3
Your writing is amazing. Very thoughtful.
Thanks for sharing your fic. Hope to read more from you in thefuture ^___^

Darn i really like the subtleness in this story..