Stuck with a Ulzzang !!

Description

You , Heyouren ~~

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.. She Lives with hir fatherhe is almost 41 years old

Her father was working in a factory ... For soon the factory went bankrupt  ..and they really need mony

Her father is currently looking for work ... it was hard on him because he is elderly
they lived in a house but because they had a debt obtained by her father and people kept asking for their money
  they had to leave
Now they love in a apartment of 4 floors .. there room had one room for sleeping and sofabed in the lounge and kitchen and dining table in the small kitchen area
Now...
 Everyone knows theorld romantic stories right? 

Romeo and Juliet, Cinderella, The Prince and the poor .... etc
Huh .... my story .. Not even close

...It Start's in a NORMAL morning

Foreword

Hi There smiley will this is my first story and so if there is some Wrong spelling(which there will becrying) sorry about them K ? ^^ so waiting for your lovely Support and .. Will i hope you will look foreword to it

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DiabolicSoul
#1
cute hehehe
xXzeroblackcatXx #2
hey!!! the story line is good but i think the grammar is kinda confusing. and korean words are not that clear like your "anuohacio" at first i thought it was some kind of coffee (sorry :P) ... it's "annyeonghasaeyo", not wei but wae. hope this help you to make a better ffic. [i'm not bashing you, just trying to help, hope you understand... sorry :)]
se3000 #3
3 Part !!!! 2 comments ??!! TT_TT looks like it's not Good ..
se3000 #4
@Melabella ThanXxXx
@--venissa Thanks ^^
melabella
#5
i really like it. Hope to hear from you soon:D
--venissa #6
update soon:)