Siwan Knows

Description

 

“Yes, hyung, I love you too..”

Foreword

 

*sigh*

i supposed to think about how to end "If We're Together" instead of doing this..

i don't know why i'm doing this..

-______-;;

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hopelesswriter #1
agree with the first part of comment below. i adore how extensive his knowledge is of other members but clueless when it comes to himself. n there comes the smarty Dongjun again..xDDD
but Siwan's straightforwardness still made me whoa...haha...oh Siwan....trying to look in books/internet?...are you sure you're the brains?...lol.
of course Heechul lurves you...it's the most obvious thing ever...xD
thanks for sharing the fic. short but cute n delivered.
Natsuki
#2
Ahw-ahw-ahw, soooo sweet! *-*
I loved the first few paragraphs, how you mentioned all the members one by one, it was so cute. I also loved the contrary between Siwan knowing almost everything about everyone, but then he suddenly has something he can't figure out and it is connected to himself. And how he went to the maknae for answers - great choice. But still, what I loved the most is obviously the happy ending. ^-^
Judging by this story only, you can write really well, and I'm glad I found your story. (: But if you accept a piece of advice, try finding yourself a beta - she(/he) will be able to help you correct those few mistakes you have. I'm quite sure those are because your native language is not English (sorry if I'm wrong), and if you or a beta would correct them, your style would become even better. (:
Thank you for sharing this story, I really enjoyed it. Good luck with your future works! ^-^