What started badly, can end well?

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Gyah, hello~ (o.o)

This is my first fanfic, and I have never written anything before! Don't hate me, if it is bad, please~~~

The story is about my own character, Jeremy O'Neil, who is send to a boardingschool by his father eventhough he doesn't really wants to. In Korea he meets someone, who will change his life. :D - Sounds cliche, but I'm not good with words xD

Please comment~ ^^

 

Sorry in advance for the spelling mistakes! I'm too lazy to edit now OTL

Foreword

I never wanted to be here in the first place..

Jeremy was in the schoolyard picking up his things, which was spread across the ground. He had just bend down do pick up his Math book, when he heard a voice.

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mapihypermonkey
#1
You're really good at writing Neko~Nyan!!!!! -impressed-
You were really good at describing things and feelings instead of just concentrating on the story - that took me a few stories (I didn't share XD) before I got the hang of it! <3
I know you want some more to read it, do my advice would be, that you should share it on quzilla instead~! :D
- sadly people only want to read fan fictions with their 'oppas' in here~! :D
but keep up the good work~! I can't wait to read the next chapter~! :D