Chapter 1: I actually love that it was all conversation in a prose format. What I don't like is when the conversations are written like play scripts with the character's name before the dialog.
I like this very much.
Not gonna lie, I was surprised at the way it was written at first - I was looking for a narration but the dialogue exchange made me keep going because it was written so well! The twist added is great and the reality you've painted in here is indeed a pill that is hard to swallow in real life. Celebrities deserve better; I hope they will be able to express their thoughts more openly and they'll have at least 60% freedom with how they want themselves and their craft presented.
Chapter 1: Even reading it again, it's still as beautiful as the first time. :) but you are right, cyber bullying and words can hurt a thousand time more than the blade of a knife. If we got nothing nice to say to someone, then don't say anything.
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