Chapter 2: This is such an amazing story, you’re really a one of a kind author. The way this story is written and the twist at the end really surprised me. I’m really proud you’re trying new things and succeeding at them. Challenge yourself, you’re growing so much as an author is so amazing to see

Chapter 2: Cool

Chapter 2: wow this was the best read I've had in so long, thanks so much for making lockdown easier ;) <3

Chapter 2: This chapter was so impressive! I didn't expect you to try this kind of more dystopia-ish stuff, so it was really fun to read! It really confirms for me how much of a strong writer you are. I really hope you'll continue to try new things, it's fun because it feels like your readers are exploring with you :')

It was fascinating to see you take on heavier themes, and I especially appreciated your refreshing take on how we deal with grief in a modern society. This might be wrong, but I interpreted that technology isn't inherently good or bad, it's that the aspects of machinery that are impersonal, but it can be either damaging or beneficial to our well-being. The contrast between the dealing with loss with the Jisoo algorithm versus the (sort of) failure of the Whistle app kind of gave me that impression but idk.

I also really like the twist at the end that Lisa and Rosie weren't actually matches, which was something that I actually didn't expect to be honest lol. After all, love works in mysterious ways, and I think that the way it connects back to how you illustrated Rosie's initial trust in the app's algorithm and code made the Rosie's change in perspective more powerful. I think Lisa's really good for her, especially when Rosie depends so heavily on logic for basically all aspects of life. I'd like to think that these two will do some serious healing and growing together after this chapter.

Of course, I also really appreciated the little references to Blackpink's discography! I'm seriously loving the idea of you writing a theme based on their song titles. It's absolutely genius and I love how creative you are with your interpretations. As always, I hope you're doing well and taking care of yourself. Much love from your readers!!!

Chapter 2: DEE OH MY GOD YOU'VE OUTDID YOURSELF WITH THE CONCEPT I LOVE IT SO MUCH?????? it feels like watching a black mirror episode, you are a genius, i swear

Chapter 2: Naw naw, should I believe in serendipity?

Chapter 1: It's lovely to see your writing again! I really look forward to this collection and seeing more of your writing :)

You started off this chapter really strong, it almost read like poetry to me with the butterflies and the "boom" you repeated throughout. I thought it was SO COOL how well you introduced this chapter with the idea of metamorphosis. I never considered that it could be painful, and that idea really fit into the rest of the story. I seriously can't get over that comparison even though it's been like a couple days since I read this chapter for the first time. I'm also so glad that this didn't turn out to be angst, I thought that things were gonna go to with the way Rosie was talking. Biggest relief of my life!!!

I absolutely ADORE your writing style and how your words encapsulate the attitudes of you characters, and it was really refreshing getting to see the story from Rosie's perspective. It's hilarious to see Lisa's ery from another point of view lmao!! Also Lisa's total ignorance to the situation and your execution with the way Lisa does everything in the most wrong way possible was MASTERFUL. YOUR HUMOR LITERALLY NEVER MISSES QUEEN.

Anyways, I really missed this series! Your writing is always filled with so much personality and thoughtfulness. Reading your work never fails to brighten my day, I'm sure that this won't be my last time re-reading this chapter either. Till next time, I hope you're doing well and that you're taking care of yourself. Much love from your readers!!!

Chapter 1: you're back! finally!!!

Chapter 1: Yeah yeah yeah boombayeah !!!