If We're Together

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When none of them are perfect, maybe, together they can be perfect

Foreword

 

I really don’t wish that anyone would like my writing, coz this is the first time I write something, well, not really, I wrote a 800+ words one shot few days ago and posted it here too.

But that’s all, so you can say that I write this as a media for me to learn how to write and develop a story.

So even if no one read it I would still continue to write this story ^^

Update will be in 2 or 3 days,

And! English is not my language, and I self learned myself, so bare the fail English please ^^;

This story tho, I myself don’t really like the early part of this story ^^;

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wildkim #1
Chapter 4: can u make 2jun story? I'm into zea this past few weeks XD
mepastah #2
Chapter 4: thank you for the fic. i like how their relationship develop and well, heewan is just cute together what else is there to say. hahahah
like everything and immensely enjoy this. thank you very much
Mimi_Loves #3
omg i loved reading this
it's perfect :D
minsoph74 #4
Love this! so super sweet and adorable~ Fabulous writing!
xkeeki #5
oh my god skhdsughasugasigurwrghahrk.gab/akbhndb,kdkf.bjbh;harkbh it was really as perfect as i thought it would be ;~~~~; LOVING THIS. ♥ /too incoherent to build a constructive comment
xkeeki #6
A HEEWAN FIC. ARE YOU KIDDING ME. THIS IS THE ING MOST SHIP-ABLE PAIRING IN ZE:A OKAY. THIS IS PERFECTION. NOW I CAN DIE BECAUSE I FEEL COMPLETED. that is, after i read the whole thing and come back to comment properly XD
hopelesswriter #7
super adore the ending scene...n some small details that made the read even more enjoyable..like how Siwan kept noticing what colour Junyoung's hair is...lmao. random yet interesting.
although i wanted to scream "WTF Heechul!" for running away...i can understand his mindset...n even the reunion scene felt so real..i could just picture everything in my head while reading. i can even picture Minwoo n Junyoung with their (misunderstood)bad boy image lol.
gah..i ship KevWoo too....bbut....HeeWan FTW.
n i love the whole idea of imperfect people who completes each other...even if it's not something unheard of.
thanks for sharing the fic, congrats on completing it n please write more HeeWan in the future (if that's not too much to ask for xD)
aegyolover #8
Wa~~~! The end is so cute! *3* I really enjoyed this fic, Heewan is a really sweet couple ^^
I hope you will do more fic in the future :)
hopelesswriter #9
OMG! are you serious?! HEEWAN!!!!
my fav pair!!!!
and you write really well!!! i totally enjoyed this...especially the first 2 chapters..i just love awkward relationships that is emotionally strong without being too close...so that's probly why i love the early parts so much..
Dongjun is too frickin smart he creeps me out...lol.
i LOLed at Dongjun only taught Kevin cursing words n
“Yeah, and Kevin’s Korean is perfect..” <- i LOLed at this too. Kevin is so cute.poor him got strawberry milk-ed
Siwan's group is like the unpopular normal underdogs n Heechul's group is like the popular bad reputation gangsters.
gah..it makes me sad to hear you're nearly finished writing this...just when i found n spazzing over it..
anyway, thanks for the fic.keep it up~! HeeWan FTW!
ps: sorry i left too long a comment.i tend to spazz at fics i enjoyed. n if you're the same person who did heewan vids on YT, just sayin' i'm the same creeper who loves spazzing over your vids. xD
aegyolover #10
How can this be!? how come there's no comments in this fic, is so cute! *3* wa~ I really like it, sad i just found it now.
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