Chapter 11: I just read the ending and I really liked it, I think that in a way everything fell into place. Many times you love someone a lot and even if it hurts you should leave them because your happiness is more important. just as Lisa took her time to heal and re-make her life I hope Jennie later can forgive herself and be as happy as she was before. I also apologized if my previous comment caused any pressure for you to change the ending. I always comment with the best possible intention and will support what you write later
Chapter 10: Taeyang and Kai do have bad intentions but Jennie has no right to blame them for cheating on Lisa. That was her decision, at that moment she decided to forget the supposed love that she has for Lisa because it was not a one-night stand, it was a years-long deception. And I feel bad that Lisa forgives Jennie just because she told Lisa that she was afraid and ashamed of their relationship. God, they are married if Jennie was so ashamed she should have left her and went with Kai to make her life. Jennie is unable to admit her mistakes and Lisa is blind enough to believe her nonsense words. In summary lisa must stay single and explore with other girls.
ps i love your writing author
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