d'aww, this is kinda sad. it feels so real because siwan mentioned it himself that he used to think the most important thing is to be on top but now realized what's important is that they're together n have a good teamwork. so proud of him to learn this lesson when he gained success. n of course Kevin can win over Kwanghee. Kwanghee's secretly scared/nervous of Kevin..hmm, wonder why....hehehe...
thanks for sharing ur first fic. it's NOT crap at all. in fact it's very well written...i don't see any glaring grammar problem at all so it's all good to me.(i'm not a grammar freak btw)

aw....THAT'S SOOOOOO ADORABLE!!! I LOVED IT! ^__^