Chapter 1: Okay, this is gonna be a long comment... First this is sad and the more I read it, I just get more sad. You'll probably get comments asking for a sequel, one thing about sequels is they ruin everything... this is me suggesting not to cave for writing one but that's still up to you.
First, I'd start with how the first part is literally just Chaeyoung barely trying to hold onto something, with the doorknob thing, I supposed their shared days since 3 years ago always somehow ends up like that, with Mina wanting to spend more and more time with Chaeyoung, prompting Chaeyoung to come back everyday hoping Mina will remember her someday.
Secondly, we get the whole gist of how they were before as a couple before Mina forgets everything. I can almost feel Chaeyoung's frustration in the second part. You can cleary feel they have this deep connection with each other, the only barrier forcing them apart is Mina's condition.
Third, Chaeyoung is still deeply in love with Mina... after all those years.
The part with Jihyo is so sad... like urging Chaeyoung to move on with her life but it's not that simple. Also Chaeyoung getting news that Mina might never get her memories back, being told that should be enough indication for Chaeyoung to get a hold of herself and start living again, like really LIVING.
Lastly, the line that struck me the most is Chaeyoung's, "I smiled, though it turned to a bitter one when I realized I could've witness that everyday of my life". She just isn't giving up and it's just sad, the heart wants what it wants.
Follow up questions, were they engaged???? Judging from the gold band in Mina's finger when she did ballet? How long have they been together before Mina's condition? I'm actually pretty curious about cases of amnesia cuz I think there really is no clear explanation as to why people just forgets everything so SUDDENLY. In movies and books, it's always caused by some accident.
This was very long, I apologize. I enjoyed reading it, btw. Kudos!
Chapter 1: Wow... so right from the start of the story, Mina is in the hospital room? For a moment I thot Mina is together with Jeongyeon. So Mina lost her memories of Chaeyoung and with Chaeyoung, well.. they can always make new ones right?
Chapter 1: omg wow bravo. i really didn't expect that at all. at first i thought Mina was engaged to someone else and turns out she lost her memories :( wonder what happened to her...
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