Night at the Burlesque

Big thanks to Koki and Phoebe and all my fellow writers in the JaeHo Exchange. It's been a privilege and a pleasure to write with you all. I'm so impressed by your creativity and hard work. ^^

My idea for this fic grew way beyond what the fluffy prompt called for, so I wrote a sequel. You can find it here: Night at the Burlesque

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Hyunnyb #1 Aug 15, 2019 07:58:02

Chapter 1: Your YunJae crack is a joy to read. Jaejoong's embarrassment was so cute and I always love your descriptions of Yunho. Makes me want to go to the local coffee shop to read the sequel!

biaswreckers-inc #2 Aug 4, 2019 16:25:32

Chapter 1: This is amazing, from Jae's internal monologue to the series of comedic mishaps (v. relatable). Well done :0

NoorKyra #3 Aug 4, 2019 10:58:10

Chapter 1: Did Jaejoong's booty short rip...???

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The last part.... I can see Yunho's smirks......!!!!!

Minchiminie83 ^{44 streak} #4 Aug 1, 2019 00:05:00

Chapter 2: why cant i enter the link ??

Minchiminie83 ^{44 streak} #5 Aug 1, 2019 00:03:04

Chapter 1: lol how does someone get locked out of their own home because of a cat ??

yuki_no_ #6 Jul 30, 2019 13:18:50

Chapter 1: I literally laughed ugly during the massage part with the thigh noise...I imagined it in my head and just lost it.

DreamyGongju #7 Jul 30, 2019 07:28:54

Very interesting

Evelyn-Everdeen #8 Jul 29, 2019 07:43:42

Chapter 2: Woah, this is so amazing! I'm really, really looking forward to writing this (though I have to admit that, not being a native speaker and not reading much from the side of AFF lately except from your stories, Mira, it did take me a bit to figure out exactly what kinds of pants Jae was wearing, so definitely thanks a lot for describing them along the way!). I love the way that blonde co-worker calls out the drinks' names, by the way! The "with legs" and "camping" :D
Also, the massage chair? That one basically screamed "Hey, I want something from you"! But I'm glad that Yunho also verbally confiemedthis :D
It's also funny how quickly Jae's attitude changed along the way! And I love Nene, she's the best. And Junsu is a very good friend here.

So, in short, thank you very much for this womderful OS and I can't wait for the sequel <3

Rainypixy #9 Jul 28, 2019 23:06:34

Chapter 1: Oh my! I really flew back to my happy “JJ's Foolproof Guide to Seduction” era with this story in which i was rolling around and laughing out loud because of your hilarious seductive naive Jae ;) GOD! I truly missed this style of writing from you. I looooove it. And can’t wait for the sequel :* :* :*