Chapter 1: It's good, but crikey, purple prose much? Not tryna get you down or anything, but I think if you chilled with all that flowery language, you'll find the story flows much better and makes for an overall, better reading experience.

“Greetings Fellow Inhabitants Of Planet L-1201… Your Fic Has Caused My Own Heart To Gallop In An Unruly Fashion Though I Would Never Gawk So Scarcely At Such Two Youthful Girls As That Seems To Come Across To My Own Encephalon As… Bewildering And Possibly A Felony. Your Strange Word Choice Aside… I Found This Story To Be Incredibly Ravishing And Tantalizing. I Have Never Felt My Own Neurons Cave In On Themselves As Much As When I Began To Deign Mine Eyes To Roam Across This Presumptuous Parable… *abstains to sip on earl grey tea and then proceeds to gag due to a caffeine allergy not previously disclosed as I would hate to give away any weaknesses that would lead to my untimely demise* As I Began To Ascertain Smoke Billowing From My Cooked, Possibly Overdone, Fleshy Matter Of the Brain Variety, I Had A Most Glorious Epiphany Regarding Your Easily Decipherable Tale… It Is Quite Possibly The Worst Fable I Have Ever Been So Cursed To Have Set My Bigly Puffed Up Pupils Upon… Rather Than Appeasing My Insatiable Cravings For A Succulent Story,,, It Only Departed With Oddly Pungent Fluid Leaking From My Hearing Orifices… i.e. ears. The Fluid Being My Actual Brain. Upon Tirelessly Closer Inspection… I Notice - Attentively - That Your Styles Mesh In An Almost Seamless Disposition… Though I No Longer Possess A Mass Of Cells Designated To Dutifully Direct Signals To My Sticky Synapses - Due To This Pustule-like Parable - I Am Still Capable Of Discerning Tumultuous Trickery When I Gaze Vivaciously Upon It… You… Indeed… YOU... Have Slighted My Countenance Beyond Metaphorical Repair… I Am Aware Of Your Sinister Scheme And Additionally I Would Never Hail to Thee As Two Or More Individuals As - Very Transparently and Pristinely - You Are One. When You Did Not Respond To My Digital And Virtual Mailing Of the Letter Variety… I Could Not Contain My Wretched Wrath And Reasonable Rage. I Should Insult You If I Dare… However This Harrowing Horror That Some May Deem “A Fable” (Not Me Of Course)... Is As It Stands… Enough Of An Insult To Yourself… And The Other Interweb Companions Of This Appreciable Site.

Chapter 1: Damn, look at that vocabulary :o
This is super well written :D

Chapter 1: Oof, I love the choices of words in this story! I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter ><

Chapter 1: da heck this is sTUpendOus like yujin lmao

thank you for leading me to this site i love it

Chapter 1: l 1201. wait CONSPIRACY THEORY. l in the alphabet is the...12th letter and then another 12 to probably show your adoration to all the girls? extra though. then wonyoung is the center so that means 01 she's the first one ranking. BOOOASJFOM lol what pd48

i like your words ;-;

and i like the way you are truly descriptive. i dead. but peace out ok k

omfasjgbauhbuwifbuj. this is gonna be cute tho dudes i cant. is this gonna be an awesome annyeongz story or what afioahf. but really though i like how it ain't those annyeongz stories ive seen on wattpad and here that always had wonyoung going through pain because yujin liked another person( asfui Minjoo). oml, i like it already