Chapter 5: HOLY E WHEN I STARTED THE STORY I WAS HOPING THAT THIS WAS ALL JUST A TERRIBLE DREAM AND NO ONE ACTUALLY DIED
THANK GOD IT WAS ALL REALLY JUST A DREAM AND EVERYONE IS STILL ALIVE OMG ASDFJKL
Also, at the beginning when Ten’s flashlight was snuffed, I couldn’t help but to focus on the detail that Taeyong didn’t even try to protest when Ten urged him to carry him back into the house. Taeyong was confused but he still did as Ten told and I found that very sweet and cute oorz asdfjkl TuT
When Doyoung was caught by the Dread, I couldn’t help but to almost cry. /Almost/ TT Like, he KNEW it was there, holding right onto his shoulder and waiting for him. Afterwards he just slowly let go of Haechan and the confusion from the younger just tore right at my heart! QAQ AND THEN HE ORDERED THEM TO STAY ALIVE AND ESCAPED AND JUST OMG I WANNA CRY I THINK I’M GONNA CRY ASDFJKL
This was a really great one-shot! >u< I was so scared that there would be a plot twist in the end but thank God they don’t have to go through that horror and it was all just a very terrible nightmare oorz asdfjkl
Chapter 5: You-
You seriously love putting my babies TaeTen through all kinds of horror, huh?
Asdffjkl why is it that aLL TAETEN STORIES FROM YOU ARE HORROR WHEEZES
Oorz, I hope my babies won’t get hurt in here asdfjkl QQ
Chapter 5: I hate this story so much because it was written so well I was terrified. Felt like screaming most of the time argh I could hardly feel sad for Mark’s death because I just wanted them to get out of the forest fast. I’m so glad you gave it a happy ending, I would’ve really not been able to sleep otherwise! I liked how dread worked, the whole ‘not letting him in’ thing was cool. I also really liked how you pretty blatantly threw clishés out the window. But wow gosh damn that was terrifying.
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