The Purpose of Life

Legend of the Sea
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The country of Fre'liar was in mourning, everyone cloaked in black attire. The daughter of one of the high officials lay inside a coffin, lined in red velvet and surrounded by a bed of white roses. It was a beautiful sight, as if she were asleep and would awaken at any time.

 

She had been murdered by a figure described as tall and thin, and it was unclear whether the witness had seen a man or woman. When the girl's body had been discovered by three young children, the officials had immediately called in a mage to determine the cause of death and magically dust for any residue left by the killer. They had found that the woman had not been ually assaulted, but had been strangled before had been slashed. It had been a vicious, cold-blooded crime, one that her killer had obviously taken much sickening joy in.

 

Once they performed the autopsy, the mage had declared that they could find no residue on her, but had found a small, white handkerchief with gold etching on the edges, draped over her face after her death. This handkerchief was distinctly from the family of Lee Sungdeul, where the only male relative that still lived in the country was Sungjong. The authorities wasted no time in arresting the young man, accusing him of the murder, and locking him away to await his trial. He would pay for this, as the evidence didn't lie.

 

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Jongin crouched behind the bushes, his legs and back burning with the effort to conceal his presence. Hiding in this way was difficult for a tall man, but that would be better than getting caught by the Cidadel guards. He knew that a lowly peasant like himself wasn't nearly important enough for their attention, but being a thief had caused him to become paranoid. He had nothing to lose, and he knew it. He still wanted to be viewed as an actual person, instead of the street rat that he knew he was. It was a delicate balance.

 

Peering through the bushes, he noticed that the guards had turned around to walk into a building, so he took his chance and stood to his feet, hissing in pain as his back cracked. Tucking his bag of stolen food by his side, he tried to walk as naturally as he possibly could. He knew that it was only a matter of time before he got recognized by someone, given he had unusually dark skin and very distinct features. Wincing, he knew he had no choice but to chance it.

 

Making his way through the crowd carefully, the young thief slipped past the people until he reached the side road. This was his escape route, one he had taken several times in his life. Fighting the urge to run, he continued walking at the brisk gate he had begun at, walking steadily and trying to be unassuming.

 

About a third of the way to his destination, he sensed someone behind him, so he risked a quick backward glance. When the woman yelled and pointed at him, he knew he had been spotted. The short, burly young man with the old woman yelled out to Jongin, breaking into a run. The thief knew he had no choice but to flee, so broke into a full on run, darting to the left at the last moment and scaling the three foot wall with ease. Crouching in the bushes just beyond the wall, he felt confident that his pursuer had lost him. Standing to his feet, he tried to calm his heart rate, feeling as if it would burst out of his chest. Taking a deep, ragged breath, he continued walking to his home.

 

Once inside his humble hut, he thought about his situation. He really didn't want to make his living stealing from others, and he knew that the shop keepers worked hard to make the food he took from them.

 

Sighing as he set the bag down on his small table, he pulled out a neatly formed bread loaf with designs on it. He was tired of this life, and hoped that there was something more substantial for him out there.

 

Fumbling one of the apples he had taken out of his bag, he cursed as if hit the ground and got bruised. Bending down to pick it up, he noticed an announcement paper on his floor. Smiling, he picked it up and settled back with the a

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Chapter two is finally up! I'm sorry it's taken so long, but with Winter work, writing time has been short. I hope you guys enjoy this!

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_forgemini
#1
Chapter 5: I come back and you've already completed this, congratulations! Though I will say that when I got to the last chapter I was a little disappointed because it felt like the story was just getting started, I had so many questions TT I'm glad you have a sequel so that we can see more of the adventure and characters! It sounds so interesting since it seems like it goes beyond just trying to break Sungjong out of jail. I'll be sure to check that one out!
KaihleeLo
#2
Yay~! Congrats on completing this~!
_forgemini
#3
Chapter 2: Congratulations on getting out the second chapter! Overall I really like it and think it establishes some nice characterization we didn't quite get in the first one like Krystal's playful attitude and Jongin's good-natured personality. I especially loved the bit where Krystal is ruminating about the hypocrisy of her family's lifestyle, how the women (specifically her grandmother) can hold so much power sway and yet have no freedom. It's also interesting that she and Myungsoo know each other/of each other despite never talking to one another. So Myungsoo's family is definitely one of wealth? She knows the likeness of his /cousin/ and can differentiate them from Myungsoo's. How much more does she know of him? Does she know of Sungjong, too? Myungsoo makes a particular point to mention that his reasons for being on the ship are not because of his family or HER. Was he the man she was to marry and that's why they are familiar with each other? She looks for him in the crowd at the mess hall, does she want to be friends? Why?

Jongin's inner thoughts about the sea and it's tendency to "purge the world of evil" or to do horrendous this to people with "impure" intentions are interesting. I wonder if these are just floating thoughts or if some part of him believes he is an enemy of the sea.

Something else that caught my attention though was the mention of a scar on Myungsoo's chin. I'm Krystal, where'd he get that? An accident as a child? I'm interested to find out what the significance is!

And oof, the dark look he gives her when she mentions she's going on this journey for her own independence. I feel bad for her, but it must be something hard to hear for Myungsoo too though. Since she implies that he's going on the journey for similar reasons to hers when in reality he's not going for his own independence but the independence of someone else. I wonder what he felt in that moment, because while we know that he's desperate to save Sungjong, I feel like we so far know very little else about how he thinks and who he is (though I'm sure this will be explored in further chapters).

Sorry, this is all so disjointed... and long...my stream on conscious can sometimes just go off (^^;
duasatu
#4
Chapter 1: Interesting plot of story, but it kinda confusing to read because there're too much sentences on one paragraph, maybe you can split it into some paragraph. Anyway great job!
mamegoma #5
I like this story although it still chapter 1 but the genre make me curious for the upcoming adventure cannot wait for more
_forgemini
#6
Chapter 1: Good job on getting out the first chapter! I like how it has introduced us to each titular character, a brief look at their histories, and why they are setting off on this journey. Jongin is the poor boy trying to escape his crimes, Krystal is the sheltered rich girl looking for adventure, and Myungsoo is trying to save Sungjong. From this, I gather the main plot will be centered around the crime Sungjong is falsely accused of, an attempt at escape, and potentially a way for him and Myungsoo to run away (because false or not he is a wanted man) or to clear his name. And I really like how this is set up to be maybe a buddy action story!

On the surface it feels like Myungsoo is the only one with real stakes in main narrative due to he and sungjong being close friends (perhaps something more? Certainly more than just a friend I would think, considering he doesn't even want to live if Sungjong were to die. Idk, though I'm interested in what history they share since it seems that Myungsoo's mother is signing legal papers on Sungjong's behalf. Were they brought up together?). But I want to put down my prediction for now that Jongin and Krystal actually have more to do with the narrative proper. My guess: Jongin who is a "tall man" is the actual killer who, for what ever reason, needed to the kill the high official's daughter, who is Krystals mother who is "now deceased". Which if true I think would set up some great tension if Krystal and Jongin were to fall in love and set some conflicts of interest if Jongin ends up helping Myungsoo in trying to free Sungjong of his sentence...

But these are just my theories for now. Thank you for writing! I can't wait to read what comes next!