Dealings

Legend of the Sea
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Over the next month, the three began to put a plan together, and by the time they had come up with something solid to go on, Myungsoo could see the forever snowy peak of Winter's Cove in the distance. The sight of the cove excited him, but it also heightened his anxiety.

 

It would take a lot to get in, and he knew he would need more than they had now, even with a higher influence as his ally. He hadn't been lying to Soojung when he had told her that he needed her clout to get in, because without it, he would simply be breaking in and helping a fugitive escape. That was something he was willing to risk for himself, knowing he could never return home afterwards, but he didn't want to put his new allies into danger. He had vowed to keep his two younger companions alive, and he planned to stick to that.

 

If their plan didn't work, his best friend would remain in prison for the rest of his life, while the real killer was walking freely about to possibly kill again. He feared that, even though the case had been closed when they had convicted Sungjong, the killer would strike again, this time killing someone of even more importance. The thought of that happening gave the young man mixed feelings, as it would mean another noble life taken, but, in the process, would exonerate his friend. With how quickly Myungsoo's own mother had signed Sungjong's life away, he no longer cared about living the life of a noble and continuing in their hasty, unjust ways. All he cared about was finding justice for the innocent girl who had been slaughtered and his precious Sungjong, who had paid the ultimate price for it.

 

Making his way over to his companions, he smiled at them, removing his hood as he sat down at the table to eat. They were still the only two people on the ship who knew Myungsoo's true identity, and he planned on keeping it that way. He had also noticed that the two of them had become quite close,forming a bond through their common interests and also their attraction to one another. While he was happy for them, their closeness caused his heart to ache for Sungjong, and intensifying the loneliness and guilt he felt over the young man's situation.

 

"Good morning, Myungsoo!" Jongin greeted him with a toothy grin, his eyes sparkling in the sunlight. "We were just talking about the creature Soojung saw in the water last night. It was long like a snake, but with the width of a shark. I've been telling her that it was clearly a shark, and they don't typically attack ships, do they?"

 

Myungsoo took a bite of golden, chewy toast on the platter, shaking his head and he turned to Soojung. The young woman frowned at him, silently agreeing that Jongin clearly had never seen or heard of a Krianac, yet another sign that he knew nothing of the dangers of the world. "I guess our young theif hasn't ever seen a Krianac. That would have been for the better, except that we'll be getting off of this ship as soon as it reaches land, and those things..."

 

"What? Those things do what?" Jongin's eyes had widened, causing him to look like a scared deer. "Is it because of us?"

 

Soojung shook her head, touching Jongin lightly on the arm. "They can kill people, but usually don't," she glanced at Myungsoo, who was watching her over the rim of his coffee cup. "If they do, it's usually not in their water-dweller form, but something else. If it comes after us once we leave the ship, we'll be in danger. However, there are so man people here to distract it that it might stay here instead."

 

"ing hell!" Jongin exclaimed loudly, now looking more terrified than ever. "So they can transform, too! How are we supposed to get anywhere with that thing on our tail? What if it transforms into a person...like one of us?"

 

Myungsoo sighed, silently wishing they had never explained the dangers of the shapeshifting creature. Reaching down to his side, he took comfort in the sharp sword he carried. It just might come in handy, but he also knew that he would need more manpower, especially if they were going to have to fight off a creature. Their journey had just become even more complicated, and he hoped they would make it to Winter's Cove safely. Even when they reached land, he knew they would have a long way to go to reach their destination.

 

Turning to Jongin, he smiled. "Don't worry. I told you I would protect you, and I intend to keep that promise, no matter what I have to face to do so."

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Chapter two is finally up! I'm sorry it's taken so long, but with Winter work, writing time has been short. I hope you guys enjoy this!

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_forgemini
#1
Chapter 5: I come back and you've already completed this, congratulations! Though I will say that when I got to the last chapter I was a little disappointed because it felt like the story was just getting started, I had so many questions TT I'm glad you have a sequel so that we can see more of the adventure and characters! It sounds so interesting since it seems like it goes beyond just trying to break Sungjong out of jail. I'll be sure to check that one out!
KaihleeLo
#2
Yay~! Congrats on completing this~!
_forgemini
#3
Chapter 2: Congratulations on getting out the second chapter! Overall I really like it and think it establishes some nice characterization we didn't quite get in the first one like Krystal's playful attitude and Jongin's good-natured personality. I especially loved the bit where Krystal is ruminating about the hypocrisy of her family's lifestyle, how the women (specifically her grandmother) can hold so much power sway and yet have no freedom. It's also interesting that she and Myungsoo know each other/of each other despite never talking to one another. So Myungsoo's family is definitely one of wealth? She knows the likeness of his /cousin/ and can differentiate them from Myungsoo's. How much more does she know of him? Does she know of Sungjong, too? Myungsoo makes a particular point to mention that his reasons for being on the ship are not because of his family or HER. Was he the man she was to marry and that's why they are familiar with each other? She looks for him in the crowd at the mess hall, does she want to be friends? Why?

Jongin's inner thoughts about the sea and it's tendency to "purge the world of evil" or to do horrendous this to people with "impure" intentions are interesting. I wonder if these are just floating thoughts or if some part of him believes he is an enemy of the sea.

Something else that caught my attention though was the mention of a scar on Myungsoo's chin. I'm Krystal, where'd he get that? An accident as a child? I'm interested to find out what the significance is!

And oof, the dark look he gives her when she mentions she's going on this journey for her own independence. I feel bad for her, but it must be something hard to hear for Myungsoo too though. Since she implies that he's going on the journey for similar reasons to hers when in reality he's not going for his own independence but the independence of someone else. I wonder what he felt in that moment, because while we know that he's desperate to save Sungjong, I feel like we so far know very little else about how he thinks and who he is (though I'm sure this will be explored in further chapters).

Sorry, this is all so disjointed... and long...my stream on conscious can sometimes just go off (^^;
duasatu
#4
Chapter 1: Interesting plot of story, but it kinda confusing to read because there're too much sentences on one paragraph, maybe you can split it into some paragraph. Anyway great job!
mamegoma #5
I like this story although it still chapter 1 but the genre make me curious for the upcoming adventure cannot wait for more
_forgemini
#6
Chapter 1: Good job on getting out the first chapter! I like how it has introduced us to each titular character, a brief look at their histories, and why they are setting off on this journey. Jongin is the poor boy trying to escape his crimes, Krystal is the sheltered rich girl looking for adventure, and Myungsoo is trying to save Sungjong. From this, I gather the main plot will be centered around the crime Sungjong is falsely accused of, an attempt at escape, and potentially a way for him and Myungsoo to run away (because false or not he is a wanted man) or to clear his name. And I really like how this is set up to be maybe a buddy action story!

On the surface it feels like Myungsoo is the only one with real stakes in main narrative due to he and sungjong being close friends (perhaps something more? Certainly more than just a friend I would think, considering he doesn't even want to live if Sungjong were to die. Idk, though I'm interested in what history they share since it seems that Myungsoo's mother is signing legal papers on Sungjong's behalf. Were they brought up together?). But I want to put down my prediction for now that Jongin and Krystal actually have more to do with the narrative proper. My guess: Jongin who is a "tall man" is the actual killer who, for what ever reason, needed to the kill the high official's daughter, who is Krystals mother who is "now deceased". Which if true I think would set up some great tension if Krystal and Jongin were to fall in love and set some conflicts of interest if Jongin ends up helping Myungsoo in trying to free Sungjong of his sentence...

But these are just my theories for now. Thank you for writing! I can't wait to read what comes next!