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一个简讯
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Giraffrey
#1
Feb 4, 2012 22:08:54
这好多了!:)
_Simplicity
#2
Feb 3, 2012 04:39:24
I just finished reading your story! It's nice, and really sweet~ You should write more, hehe ^^
ItsRainingkpop
#3
Feb 3, 2012 04:35:54
谢谢你的意见!:) 其实中文是我的母语但我除了每天都说华语和在学校写作文以外都是用英文的。。。我会加油的!:)
Giraffrey
#4
Feb 3, 2012 04:30:21
这故事不好吗?很好啊!很甜蜜,但是有点短,内容不太充分。结尾也收拾得不是很好,不够感人。中文应该不是你的母语吧?不用紧,读多一些华文书,掌握多一些写作技巧就行了。加油!:)
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