Chapter 1: I've been trying to find the words to comment on this story since the first time I've read it. Well, I've come back and read it three more times and I still find myself at a loss. I'm pretty sure this has become one of my favourite fics of all time.
The world you've created here feels like a glittery snow globe. It's like a wintery happy bubble, where the sunlight reflected by the snow makes everything appear brighter.
Even if there were some bittersweet moments, it is still felt very uplifting. One thing that I love in your writing is that you are able to describe complicated emotions very well. Kibum and Jonghyun's unresolved feelings for each other are portrayed so delicately, melancholic but not necessarily regretful of how things had gone, and Taemin's silent understanding of Kibum's feelings while reaching for him at the same time was really endearing.
I absolutely loved Nayoung's vows, I ended up crying every single time I read them. Jonghyun's heart is really very precious. I could really picture his smile and loving eyes throughout the story and they really stayed with me.
If I understand well, you naturally tend to write darker themes? And you are unbelievably good at them. But the atmosphere here was so bright and beautiful, I really hope to be able to read something like this from you again in the future. But really, thank you so much for this. I will treasure this story in my heart for a long time.
Chapter 1: This fic was beautiful and the way you talked about the different universes and outcomes that could happen was amazing. I think a lot about how the members would get married and how close they are they would definitely do something similar like this with each other. I love how each .. chapter/drabble? was different and it wasnt all in order it just kinda made me think in different perspectives. Also the tender moments between jongkey and taekey was everything. This fic felt really realistic and thank you for writing this ♡♡ I think I read this a while ago but I was still a bit sensitive so I couldn't bring myself to comment but rereading it again it's made me feel better
Chapter 1: I always imagine him getting married and be a wonderful father. What a beautiful life i see here. I can see his smile while saying the sincere feelings.
I can see his frowns when he was contemplating, lying to Key. I miss him.. Thank you so much for writing this. Its not easy for me to read it but i've toughen myself because i miss him so much... and what an odd timing because i am key rn.. i'm heartbroken but i'm happy. Everything happens for a reason. I love you sherleigh. Thank you again and may happiness will always be with you.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This is wonderful. It made me happy thinking of Jjong. <3 Please keep writing. Your works are gold. And you give justice to the wonderful enigma that is the (prospective) taekey love affair. :)
Chapter 1: Gish of course the Pup would have to be so emotional on his wedding like thattt. I love how you wrote the ‘thing’ that is going on between jong and key. There’s a thin line separating their relationship between friends and more in the story. You wrote that so well?
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