Chapter 4:
I really hope you would continue this fanfic , already half a decade you haven't updated it >.<
BTW, here is the original poster of your fanfic: https://photo.asianfanfics.com/user/1406/7df5d7.jpg
(i have it in my lap since long ago^^)

Chapter 4: Still waiting??
.... Waiting!!
...........WAITING :\

update soon please

Good story so far.
Aaron seems to have taken quite a liking to Gui Gui :)

Finally you are back so NOW here I am, LOL *as promised*
See?? I am still here ;) hehehehee .....
OH GOD!! just look at my last comment it was on 10-24-2010 O.o
It's almost 2 years already XD
Hopefully, you will continue to update this story till it completed ^-^
Like usual, you keep updating and I will keep commenting haha ... *friend with benefit* lol :p
Nahhh!! I am just joking ... I REALLY MISS YOU :D (WELCOME BACK^^)

Update!!!
Wow love the pic!!!

you are finally back
I cant wait for your updates

Update update update!!!

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