MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

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Hei, it's a sequel my brother who love me.

If you want read this story,

maybe you must read a 1st story.

my brother who love me [Complete]

here is the link

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/12359/my-brother-who-love-me-onewhttp://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/12359/my-brother-who-love-me-onew

Because if you don't,

you can confussed while read this story....

But, if u too lazy for read the last story, you can skip it and read the sequel...

it's up to u... Keke^^

And i'm so sorry if my grammar error :( because english isn't my first language.

i still learn it 

 

5 years later.....

After Onew leaving you (I gave you a name. Your name is Lee Jie Eun because i don't like to put "____" So, i gave you a name. But i didn't put "Jie Eun's POV" and i put "YOUR POV" in this story because i want u to imagine if Jie Eun is You, a reader) to US,

you become a different people.

You was changed became a cold-hearted girl.

And you still have arelationship with Lee Joon.

But honestly, you never happy with Joon. He really possesive to you and make you haven't a much time with your family and your friend.

You still be a bestfriend with Krystal and Sulli.

But about Jessica, you never met her again because her parents said she move to somewhere and she didn't told you.

Now Minho work in his own hotel as a president director.

And he planning to marrying Krystal. Now Krystal joined with you opening a boutique.

Taemin opening a chicken store and he still can't confess her love to Sulli.

Sulli become a famous model.

Jonghyun now opened a music school and just marrying with Sekyung. And Sekyung now a pregnant!

But, you didn't ever communicated with Onew again.

He always trying to calling you, but you always rejected his phone.

And you heard from your parents, now she become a good architecture in US and soon,

he'll come back to Seoul.

In your heart, you really happy your brother would come back since you really missing him.

But you always acted if you didn't care about that.

And what if he come back to Korea for marrying you and it's as asked your parents whom want you marrying him???

And your parents have a big secret about you and Onew??

when he come back to Seoul, he already have a girlfriend and you know who is she.

 secretly, you still loving your brother.

And Onew still loving you too.

Foreword

for you who do not want to read the first story of this sequel and wanted to immediately read the sequel, this review of the first story:


you (Lee Jie Eun) and Onew is brother and sister.

he's very overprotective of you.

Moreover your relationship with other men.

But it turns out he did it because he loves you more than siblings.

Then you close with a man named Key. And your oppa knowing about that.

When you want to date with the key, he followed you.

And while Key wants to make confession to you,

it turns out Onew hiding behind a tree, both of you eavesdrop.

And more surprisingly, it turns out Key approach you not because he likes you,

but because he wanted to ask your help to get dating with Onew oppa.

You're so heartbroken at the time and you be the one that has no emotion.

Your friends and Onew oppa plan to help you to moving on.

And Jessica, your friend advise to your others friends and Onew oppa

to introduce you to another man.

Which at the time was Lee Joon, her own cousin.

But it turns out she did it not because she wants to help you,

but because she loves Onew oppa and she began to suspect

if Onew oppa love you more than a brother.

Then they plan to introduce you to Lee Joon at Minho's birthday party.

But because Onew oppa is very jealous and does not want you to close

with another man,

he eventually decided to come to a Minho's birthday party .

Because of Minho's birthday party's theme is a party mask,

when you met a man who stole your first kiss

and you're secretly starting to like him,

you do not realize that he is Onew oppa.


You begin to find out who he was.

But when you ask for Minho help in finding  cctv footage at the time

of his birthday party and find out who the man was actually

(Minho was the son of the owner of the hotel where he has a birthday,

so he had the authority to take footage cctv),

you saw in that room , Minho and Onew oppa erase CCTV

footage that you have requested.

You are very angry with him.

And finally, because he feels guilty,

he did not go home and stay at Jonghyun's house, his best friend.

He began telling Jonghyun if he loves you more than a brother.

But without them knowing it,

it's you hear their conversation because previous

Jonghyun  tell you that Onew was staying at his house

and you rushed to pick him up because you're so worried about him.

You really shocked and amazed that Onew is the guy

who kissed you that night and have stolen your heart.

And finally, you begin to realize that you also love him

. But it was too late, because he decided to pursue graduate

studies in the United States so he could forget.

Finally you receive love Joon, who was initially very nice to you.

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.