WHAT HAPPENED WITH JOON?

MARRYING MY BLOOD BROTHER?! (sequel of my brother who love me)

*ONEW POV*

Already 2 months I've been dating Jie Eun.

We always spend time together every day.

If I was too busy with my office, she who always came to my

 office and brought my lunch. And vice versa,

if I have free time, I will come to her boutique to

get her lunch, or we order food and have lunch there.

And on weekends, either Saturday or a sunday,

we always go on a date.

But that makes me sad, I can not tell the secret to Jie Eun.

Appa always told me not to tell her. In fact,

I wanted to notify to Jie Eun. I'm afraid, if we tell her later,

she will hate us for keeping it from her. And I'm afraid

if I would lose her because of the secret. Oh yeah, in addition to Appa,

umma also already know my relationship and Jie Eun.

Initially she told me not and will not let me courted Jie Eun,

but after Appa told her that I have learned the secret,

she finally  let me courted Jie Eun. But again,

only I knew that umma and Appa let them know we

were dating and our special relationship.

And to Jie Eun, she had absolutely no idea.

So I always act if we are dating  secretly to our parents.

All my friends and Jie Eun

did not know our real relationship.

I do not want later they have another opinion against us.

 

Oh, and about Jessica,

That girl was just annoying me and claim herself as myfuture wife.

I've been warned to stay away from me,

but she'stoo stubborn and shameless.

She always came to my office everyday.

Oh yeah, you know, that witch was sometime

ago came tomy father's office. She told appa

all things about me and JieEun. She told my father

that I and Jie Eun dating. And you know

what my father's reaction?

He just said: Oh, Jinjja? Was goodthen.

I'd rather let my son going out with my daughter in the appeal he 

had to get stuck with a crazy girl like you."

When I heard the story fromAppa,

I can not stop laugh imagine Jessica's

face when she heard my father saying that.

And about Joon, oh god! He's still disturbing

my girlfriend even though I many times warned him.

Today my schedule at work is not too dense.

 So I can accompany Jie Eun lunch.

Thankfully Krystal is not here today.

She go with Minho to prepairing their wedding.

Because 3 days later a day of their wedding.

As always, never bored, I looked at my lover's

beautiful face as she was eating.

Seeing full of food,

the way she chews the food, and her face flustered when

she realized I was staring at her,really...

Maybe for the rest of my life was not enough to look

at that angel face.

"Y-yahh ~ Oppa! Stop looking at me like this.

Do you not want to eat? "said Jie Eun,

taking the pieces of his own pizza.
"No, just look at you I'm already full."

I said without taking my eyes from her
"Oh, all right. Just Look me. And I assure you,

 that I would spend your chicken pizza."

Said Jie Eun and held out her hand, wants to take the

remaining pieces of pizza in pizza box.
"Y-Aish ... Arraseo yahh ~ ~ I'll eat now."

I said and my vision leads to the pizza box.

But I was surprised, the remaining piece of pizza.

Aish ... I think I bought pizza contains eight pieces.

But why now living a piece?
"Jakiya, why it’s  lived a piece of pizza?"

 I asked Jie Eun who was still chewing her pizza.

She then glanced towards the pizza box and giggled.
"Oh ~ pizza. Those pizza had i send  safely

into my stomach, oppa." She said giggling.
"Bwoh? Yahh! Are you a monster? You ~ Aish ...

You spent seven pieces at once?

You really are a creepy little monster. "I said,

looking at her in disbelief.
"yahh, oppa! Who would've made me hungry?

 I did not eat anything from last night. Just who is already

 locked me in your office last night until morning, huh?"

said Jie Eun, snorted irritably. I then scratched my head.

Given what happened last night.

 

* Flashback *

Tonight Jie Eun came into my office, pick me up for dinner.
"Oppa, whether your job is complete?"

Ask Jie Eun while sitting on the couch in

my office.

"Wait a minute. I just checked some documents only."

I said, looking briefly at her and smiled,

then focused again on the documents when I check.

This past month I was handling a project of the mall.

So I'm very busy. He then came over and put a glass of warm

 coffee on my desk.
"This, oppa, for you. I'm sure you must be thirsty."

said Jie Eun and store glasses on my desk.

I then took it and drank it.
"Gomawo, jakiya ~" I said and her arm.

Token of appreciation. She just nodded her head

and smiled sweetly at me.

 

"Aigoo ~ my boyfriend must have been working hard

 so sweating like this." She said, took a tissue

and wiped the sweat from my forehead.

Because she wiped a tissue on my forehead,

then she lowered her head, her face to me.

I then pulled her waist. Made her sit on my lap and wrapped

my arms around her waist. She then flushed.
"Yahh ~ oppa. Later one can see us."

She said, trying to stand. But I pulled her closer.

Making our faces is pretty close.
"I do not care. I really miss you, Jie Eun."

I said and kissed her cheek.

"Saranghae, Jie Eun ..." I said again.

But now I close my lips to hers, I realized that

she closed her eyes. Preparing to receive

my lips landed on her lips. When our lips almost touch,
"Hyung, are you there?" I heard a faint Taemin’s voice

outside my office. I encourage Jie Eun spontaneity of my lap

 so that she fell.
"Ouch ... yahh ~ Op ~" She screamed in pain.

But I immediately covered with

my hand and pulled her under my desk, to hide there.

 I then give expression to apologize to her

for having made her fall. I immediately stood up.
"Neh, Taemin. I'm here. Go on." I said to Taemin.

We chatted for about 30 minutes.

Until I forget if my beloved Jie Eun hiding under my desk

and finally .... I left her alone in my office.
 

* END OF Flashback *

 

“Ah ~ Mianhe, jakiya. I forget if you hide ~"

I'm scratching my head.

Feeling guilty for having left him all day.
"Aish, you know, oppa, I really fear there.

And look, my knee until now sore because

I had to sit under your desk. "She said,

pointing towards her knees.
"Mi-mianhe Jie Eun-ah. Arraseo ...  just  spend your pizza."

I said, let the pizza is left for Jie Eun.

But with a face that is not willing.
"Aish ~ You think I'm going to the heart to let my

boyfriend die of hunger? Take it easy ...

I've already ordered for you fried chicken oppa.

And I also order the spicy chicken wing for you.

Taemin say their food is coming soon."

She said and smiled at me.
"Ah, Jinjja? Gomawo, jakiya ~"

I said, hugging her. But before I could do something else,

Jie Eun’s phone rang.
"Yeobboseyo ~ Oh, ne, it's me, Jie Eun.

Oh, neh .... Any-anyeong haseyo, Mr. Lee.

 N-neh? B-bwoh?! Fine, I’ll be right there, neh ... "

She looked panic when closing the phone.
"The call from whom?" I asked, slightly worried look Jie Eun.
"From Joon’s father, oppa. He said Joon

attempted suicide this morning. Now he is in care at the hospital.

But because he kept calling out my name as he slept,

his father finally called me. How is it  oppa? "

said Jie Eun, panic.

 

"His father? How did he know your number?" I asked confused.
"I do not know. Actually I also had never met him.

 Maybe he got my number from Joon’s phone.

Eottokkeuh, oppa? If something happens with Joon,

it's all my fault." She said, starting to cry.
"But, are you sure this is not a trick of Joon to trap ~"
"No, oppa. I'm sure this time for real. How is this?"
"All right. You may visit him in hospital.

But I will accompany you in there.

I do not want something happen to you."I said.

 Then we both rushed off to hospital.
 

 

* END OF Onew POV *
 

TEASERS:

"Park Hae-Ri?"

"Sorry, but I'm not Park Hae-Ri. Maybe you have the wrong person."

 

“Please don’t leave me…”

 


 

thank's 4 your comments :)

still leave a comment guys..

and i'm sorry this chapter a little bit bored.

i'll try my best to write the next chapter more interesting

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Littlemrsmalfoy
#1
Chapter 3: Love the story and I'm really sorry to say that but the English in that fanfiction is terrible. The sentences don't make sense so the reader has to figure out everything and the words are written in a bad form. For example ''"Did Onew hyung knows about that?" Said Jonghyun oppa.'' The sentence is structured wrong. It should be ''Does Onew Hyung know about that?'' You could change the 'said' to 'Jonghyun-Oppa asked surprised''. This would create a better understanding of what the characters feel. More descriptive writing would allow the character to get more involved in to the story so he/she would feel more like part of it. Cheers xxx
wifeyhoya #2
I cant open the first story. And its say error invalid id.
gail129
#3
I can't find the first story of marrying my blood brother ><
i used the link but it says couldn't find the page
BlueCupcake
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my! Wow! Update soon.
amicoolikethat #5
Chapter 48: author nim ^^
stay and be strong HWAITING!!
take care of yourself
i know what its like losing someone you love :'(
im pretty sure your boyfriend will be watching over you in heaven
SARANGHAE AUTHOR NIM STAY STRONG :D. <3
foreverONKEY14
#6
author-nim ..

when will you update again ?
PinkCookie
#7
update soon
aziena #8
ohh.. I just read about this...be strong, ok...
Sonelfwol #9
author-nim..keep spirit..and don't be sad for too long ok?
unnie..fighting!!
and update soon!!^^
gail129
#10
take your time unnie..... fighting... i know how it fells to lose someone you love from cancer... i really do... i felt the same way when i lost my family member from cancer.