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Void — Shall the game begin? 「apply open」
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Finally_Home /
Jin Sunhee
Sniper (#4)
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status : accepted.

Hello! First of all thank you for being the first applicant, I was a bit hesitant whether people will get interested in this applyfic or not as this is my very first one! And you are just so fast?? Anyway, sorry about the difficulties in editing the layout, I didn't know people would try to change the background image so I made its height fixed, sorry! and I am not really updated with idols nowadays so I hope I put in the right picture (she's really cute btw, idk why but she reminds me of 4minute hyuna in some of her photos!), sweats nervously.
Okay get into the review, I really do enjoy reading through your application! I can totally relate to her whiny personality because I do have one friend who acts like that, and it's funny to see! Oh and I can already smell the drama coming with #2 plot due to her optimistic personality, tbh.
Overall, she is a really lovely character, I sure can imagine writing her in the story (Especially all these dramas coming with her personality). Thank you for applying!
Jaeger_104 /
Seo Jaekwang
Technology (#5)
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status : accepted.

Hello! How is everyone so fast? aksjdkasd. Anyway, wow, I never know new idols but astro's eunwoo sure look really cute! Anyway, about the date of birth, I stated that it's the year of 2123 in the story, so I'm pretty sure you meant to say his year of birth is 2102? correct me if I'm wrong!
Moving on to the personality, wow I can already feel he is just like older brother to the #2 plotline! I'm pretty sure I can write much based on that. Tbh, I can totally relate to his feeling, and I just feel like he is like a ticking bomb, hiding all emotions inside, but is ready to explode in front of people he trust the most.
You stated that he is a LoL player, and I'm pretty sure there won't be any LoL in the year of 2123, but if you don't mind I want to change it to a game similar to LoL but using VR! Do you get what I mean? I'm not sure what it's going to be called so I will just call it LoL for now! (and orz he probably should teach me his way bcs I totally at playing either LoL nor dota2). And, breathes, a doggo!! fudge the doggo looks exactly like my dog I Love Lux Already.
Overall, I really do enjoy reading through your character! Thank you for applying!
noseoul /
Yook Oyeon
Sniper (#4)
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status : accepted.

Hello! First of all wow so many pictures, I love <3 and she is just so pretty! wow a pubg player, I totally love that game. If you don't mind, I'd like to change the pubg's name because I'm sure there won't be any pubg in the year of 2123. It will be similar with pubg but with VR, if you get what I mean.
Moving on to the review, I really enjoy reading through your application. I love her optimistic yet bossy personality! I can already feel myself getting pissed with those kind of people in real life. jkjk. I feel like she will need a mature figure due to her personality, she is swooned way too easily it's dangerous. And a crush toward #6 plotline? that guy sure is popular with girls! I can already feel her 'puppy crush' toward #6.
Anyway, I don't see anything wrong with Oyeon's story, thank you sm for applying! you probably need to sleep though, your health is important!
iheartswag /
Yang Ahn Joo
Magic (#3)
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status : accepted.

Hello! Wow it's so sunshiney, it really fits in the character <3 I swear I saw this kyulkyung girl before but she's soo cute!! Anyway, I really enjoy reading Ahn Joo's story! You typoed her year of birth in the background though.
I feel like she will get along with #2, like her older sister? because she has a younger sister she probably can handle her the most! --but everyone else in the team probably think those two are both kids-- Overall, I don't see anything wrong with your story, I have one question though (you don't have to edit this in because I'm just curious but it's optional!) why did she get that many piercings?
illegally /
Son Juyeon
Puppeteer (#2)
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status : accepted.

Hello! First of all, wow heejin is really pretty! Never seen loona before so I'm in awe. Your gifs kind of reminds me of miss a's suzy, a little. Anyway, my eyes really like seeing your application <3
Moving on to the review, reading the personality I suppose she's a perfectionist! I really love how she's actually just an insecure little girl deep inside. I'm actually curious about one thing, what would she do if one of her fans suddenly come and invite her for a small talk, Since she's not good with people in general? Will she be like an awkward potato or force herself to be bubbly for the sake of her fans?
Anyway, I really do enjoy reading this! I can imagine she will get along with #1 the most since Juyeon is really close with her brother. Thank you for applying!
dorixs /
Jeon Sejin
Dual Swords (#6)
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status : accepted.

Hello! this is fast, I thought you'd need more time when you said you actually have no idea what to write. Anyway, Wow sejin is sooo tall! He's probably really popular with girls. Now I'm curious, did he have a lot of ex?
I really love his 'normal boring' story because of course not everyone can have such an 'exciting' everyday story. Now I can't find anything wrong with your character, oh I have one last question. It is stated that he hates chocolate, what if one of his friend give him chocolate? Will he blatantly reject it, with sarcastic remarks, or will he force himself to accept it?
Anyway I really enjoy reading this, thank you for aplying!
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maelynn
please be patient with my turtle self, I haven't coded every part of the layout yet ehe.

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toska-
#1
hi!
i was just wondering if you were going to continue with this story.
i mean, it'd be so cool if you did because this plot is pretty awesome! ( ; w ; )
welp, whatever you decide to do, i wish you all the best~
TheOnlyAce
#2
hi hello! I just passed my application and quite nervous cause I don't know if it was good. anyway, i am just looking back to check the story (and also do a double check in case i did something wrong in my app). i also just want to say that i really love the concept of the story since applyfics are rare to be this interactive so i am really looking forward to this. good job!
spontaneity
#3
i'm in love with the layout!!
also, the story sounds lit af, imma try my best to apply ^^
best of luck w everything!
dorixs #4
Chapter 3: thanks for the fast review! and to answer your questions, he never even dated before and if a friend offers him chocolate he'll just kindly reject :)
illegally
#5
Chapter 3: hey! thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked juyeon ♡
to answer your question, she would certainly be a little awkward, but her fans find that endearing about her. the conversation would most likely be driven by the fan rather than juyeon herself. :)
maelynn
#6
to make things easier, I will just put the number of applicants here ( please excuse my lazy ) :
PLOTLINE ⠀⠀⠀⠀NUMBER
⠀ ⠀#1 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀0
⠀ ⠀#2 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀1
⠀⠀ #3 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀1
⠀⠀ #4 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀2
⠀⠀ #5 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀1
⠀⠀ #6 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀1
dorixs #7
i started my app but i literally have no ideas for this hdidhiahd
iheartswag
#8
Chapter 3: hi hi! thank you for the review, i've gotten rid of her typo of the bdate in the bg section hehe!
oh the reason why she got so many piercings is cause she just wanna look cool and all lol! but tho there are many piercings on her ears, she'd prolly only fill some of it with earrings, others she'd just forget about it as time goes by lmao! ^^
ryjeveuse
#9
hello! i ve got some questions,
1. this is stupid but i am assuming you use the international age, right? just so i can get the birthyear right
2. is it ok if i make my character dissapear on camera? or on a live show or something— since that will cause a stir in public and idk if you would like that or not
noseoul
#10
Chapter 3: i was wondering that maybe in the future, there would be another more popular game so yes, i would love it if you change it to something else!
i'm glad that you love her and how you would find peeps like her annoying irl because Yes, that's what i'm aiming at. a character who everyone hates wehrferfgdfr
thank you for the lovely review!