Chapter 1: I really enjoyed reading this imaginative and inventive story....a bit more romantism would have been nice, but at least they were together ...AND holding hands :)
Chapter 1: This was just one of the greatest most awesome story I have ever read, thanks. I am so glad that they ended up together without causing a bad change in their new world. Please continue to write I want to read more of your stories.
Chapter 1: Wow, I feel like I just watched a movie. It took me 2,5 hours to read this monster of yours and I loved it! I couldn't stop reading, seriously. Why are you insecure about your writing, it's like a thousand times better than mine!! Now I feel insecure haha.
First things first, I need more YeChul moments. What would have been wrong with him running into the shower Jongwoon was having, and showering together. It would have fit perfectly xD
No but seriously, the friendships in this story are adorable. Heechul and Jongwoon as best friends just fits perfectly. And Heechul is really just a male version of me lol. He said all the things I would have said in the same situation! I laughed quite a lot at his remarks haha. Sungmin was sweet too, being the hard serious manager, but secretly caring about Jongwoon and Heechul. I can totally see him scolding the two of them for being late or not doing what they were supposed to do.
Ryeowook, Hyukjae and Han Geng are just precious. The way they take care of Kyuhyun made me feel warm inside. Not to make it too personal and all, I personally have lots of troubles in my life, and I would kill for friends like that. Kyuhyun could just be himself, and they never backed away from him. I hope that real people can be just like that too =^^= For everyone!
Extra points for oblivious Donghae. I love Donghae like that, it matches him xD
As for the actual story, it was really good! I have a very good imagination, and I could totally picture everything you wrote and understand it easily! You described things very well, and as you said you weren't good at it, I will let you know that you were BRILLIANT at it. I could see the surroundings, the 'yarn', the little red light leading them through a dark building (ehm, why did Heechul allow Jongwoon to go there alone, this is how people die in horror movies).
The ending was sweet <3 And the fluff was just right. I didn't hurl the whole time. Though, I was really rooting for a kiss. Can I demand a prequel?
Love you, really looking forward to your next story <3
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