Deception

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When Chaeyoung follows Dahyun to her weekly hookup with young married stunner Sana Minatozaki, she isn't expecting to run into Sana's beautiful stepdaughter Chou Tzuyu... Thus, a dillema is born. Dahyun needs Chaeyoung to continuously distract Sana's stepdaughter so that she can see Sana without her family finding out, and Chaeyoung agrees naively. 

Little does she know, these things never end well. 

 

{I'm not good at descriptions so please just read the fic i hope you like it!}

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Wilddvacat #1
Chapter 2: Damn this is funny! I really hope you continue
cupidsana #2
Chapter 2: Holy this is AMAZING omfg theres only 2 chapters but you have me so hooked on already???? THIS DESERVES MORE RECOGNITION AND IM SURE IT WILL DO WITH FUTURE CHAPTERS BUT AHH I CANT WAIT ALREADY TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT !! Tzuyu is sophisticated and rich and theres chaeng in college having the biggest crush already and im already loving this whole scenario ugh this is insane and saida and chaeyu are my absolute FAVE ships in twice so this fic is so perfect for me :')) im crying i love this so much honestly and your writing is so good!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK ♡
Twiceflexible #3
Chapter 2: ohgod i'm wheezing because this reminds me of my best friend and i whenever we 'argue'
bluelyps27 #4
Chapter 2: Out of the myriad of stories I've read, I think I would have to say that this has been the funniest, so far. I mean, certain parts have been absolutely hilarious! I'm not a writer so I have no idea how difficult it is to make somebody laugh but seeing as it hasn't happened too often, it's either not a genre too many writers are interested in writing or it's more difficult than one thinks. I'm prone to believing it's the latter. So congratulations on being able to make your readers crack up! I mean, I had to stifle my laughter so my gf wouldn't wake up from my quaking body.

Even though the ideas seem a bit crackpot in this story, when you think about it, it really could happen. I mean, if I was as bored as Chaeyoung on a Friday night, I'd probably do the same thing. Follow my friend to possibly witness her y shenanigans with a rich married woman and in doing so, actually save her from gut wrenching heartache due to possibly being found out by her lover's step daughter. HAHAHA Seriously though, I like Dahyun and Chaeyoung's friendship. They may be a bit stooge-like in their behavior but at the end of the day, they love each other, as can be seen by the antics they get up to. lol

Thanks for the laughs and please continue your magic! I was here mainly for SaiDa but I think the comical interactions of all characters will keep me here.
Kenmanami #5
Chapter 2: This is without a doubt the most funny series I've read here
teudoongijjang #6
Chapter 2: I love the dialogue between Chaeng and Dahyun omfg.
lessofyou #7
Chapter 2: I swear this is probably the funniest fan fic I've readㅋㅋ. I loved Chaeng's distraction :)
ramennn #8
Chapter 1: this is so cute and funny im laughing like a madman here while everyone else in the house is asleep this deserves an upvote.
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