Chapter 1: The quote at the start really caught my attention, and I like how you began Scene I. Interesting how Solar and Byul said the same line in Scene II, but the weight of the words differ vastly; I like how Scenes III and VII started with this line. Dang, that tension between Jessica and Taeyeon though! Taeyeon using Jessica's words on her... Touché. What an unfortunate situation: Byul had no choice but to hold back her feelings, and in doing so Solar was left hanging. It's quite sad that Byul had to remind herself of her situation with this line: 'You gotta train your mind to be stronger than your emotions or else you’ll lose yourself everytime.' but ultimately she's whipped for Solar. That dilemma! Why do I feel Seulgi and Byul might slip up one day, and Solar might get involved in what they're doing :( Looking forward to reading the next chapter! Just a question: since this is written in a form of a TV series, does that mean that each chapter is like an episode?

Chapter 1: love the beginning!
looking forward to the next chap~ :D