Letter to Somi

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Honey Somi,

I could have beer in the cafe, my sanity at lunch. Trying to forget how much I want you, innocence at dinner, pour something into my glass. Everything and anything to get me peencher, but nothing gets me as ecstatic as this. I've chosen my poison and it's you, nothing kills me like you. You go straight to my head. I'm moving towards my limit. I chose my poison and it's you, I chose my poison and it's you. It's not like I make a list of new ways to hurt your heart, I'm just like a wet paint. I fight to contain the love in my veins, and how it circulates ... There is a crack in my soul, you thought it was a smile .... My body shakes and I wait for your shine. I am sure I am a danger to myself, but are you sure that I am a danger to others? I've had enough, I'm closer. I'm closer ...

Foreword

"I thought I'd been hurt before, but no one ever left me so sore. Your words cut more than knives, now I need someone to bring me life. I feel like I'm sinking, but I know I can get out alive if I stop calling her my love and move on. You see me bleed until I can not breathe. I'm trembling, falling to my knees."

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VickMattos
#1
I'll fix this. As I had to translate, I ended up forgetting about these points. I will improve and try to fix everything.

Thanks for comment.
Hanbyeul
#2
Chapter 1: You overuse ellipsis a lot and you don't use "-" for dialogue you use quotations, the timeline is hard to understand but Idk what I'm not understanding.