System Override

Description

Artificial Intelligence took over the world. Everything was connected to the system, people were divided in two, by financial state; very poor or very rich. Obviously, very rich people had security, they lived like kings, while poor people suffered at how carelessly the rich lived. Donghae managed to be on top, to be one of the most respected scientist, however, he had only one test subject. Only one he had fought for. He gave up everything to be on the top, to see him again. Even for one last time, he wanted to see him again.

I’ll make sure you come back to me.

Donghae stared at Hyukjae while he sipped from his wine. He was ready to get Hyukjae out of that room.

His name is Lee Hyukjae.

Have you ever heard of ALPHA-01?

Can you say anything?

My name is Lee Donghae.

Do not be afraid of me.

 

"you say you’re the cure

but I smell your disease

I’ve figured you out

like a rat in a cage"

 

 


I could not keep these thoughts in my head anymore, so I wrote this story. I do not plan to have this as a long one, only 2 chapters, but those are lengthy. I would love to hear your thoughts about it. 
THIS and THIS gave me inspirations and motivation to write. I know, I know, I already have two other stories that are on-going, but still! I am kinda proud of this one, so I thought I just share it with you all. I hope you don't mind! 

Title: System Override

Pairing: Haehyuk 

Genre: Angst, Romance

Length: 2 chapters

Warnings: Mental breakdown is possible in this story, as well as depression, and it might turn into heavy angst later on

 

Please check on my other stories as well: 

Are you still alive? 

Happy Birthday

 

 

 

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yvette0912
#1
The music you provide is so attractive! I'm not reading yet, but I think they're good bgm with is story, sice they inspired you hhh
de_m00n
#2
Chapter 2: Finally I can write comments here.. I'm glad I found this story
Thank you..
reiry24
#3
Chapter 2: I hope there's going to be a sequel for this. I just love how the story progresses.

I'm also proud of Hyukkie!!
DamnyHyuk
#4
Omg..i love it.. I love how possessive hae is..but in the sweet way i mean..

Hope u'll make sequel for this fic..
EunHaeLove42 #5
Chapter 2: Yes I've heard Hot Babe and I agree that our Hyukkie did an amazing job! ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡ )
EunHaeLove42 #6
Chapter 2: Wow, wow, wow... I could feel every emotion the two felt. Incredible! ( ͡^ ͜ʖ ͡^) Although I wish Hae would've saw Hyuk's beautiful gummy smile at the end.

Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story. Keep up the good work!
EunHaeLove42 #7
Chapter 1: Wow...very intriguing first chapter. I found everything about interesting.
Erisedecho
#8
Chapter 2: this story is so beautiful...so so beautiful....Donghae loves Hyukjae so much he devoted his whole life to care for him but when he finally wakes Hyukjae up, he's changed. He isn't the Hyukjae that Donghae tried so hard to save anymore. Part of it is because Donghae didn't return Hyukjae's memories, but I'd like to think Donghae is only doing that to protect him. Hyukjae must have went through hell in that program and Donghae probably doesn't want him to remember because he knows the memories are going to tear Hyukjae apart again.
Its probably a terrible internal struggle for Donghae but the ending seems hopeful, after all, you can lose your memories, but your body will still remember that person you love.
haehyuk91
#9
Chapter 2: It was very touchable....and very beautiful and so sad
That Donghae was constantly looking for someone he knew while Hyukjae had changed
I wonder why Donghae did not return Hyukjae's memories?And really Hyukjae did not remember anything from the past?
Despite all this, I'm sure they can fall in love with each other again
Thank you for this beautiful story .....I'm also waiting for the next part of Are you still alive? please keep it writing and update soone.
ddalgi_ #10
Chapter 1: This storyplot is real cool! like wow.

Hyuk in the last bit scene seems so soft and innocence(or maybe its just me being biased) TT i hope hae could find the old hyuk and feels back TT Thanks for the update!!!!

p.s i also read your other stories but kinda forgot to comment. I'm sorry !! Just so you know , i love your writing !! keep it up ^~^