Chapter 3

Behind Iron Bars
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The first thing Sehun noticed when he came out of his strange trance was that shards of the iron bars were all over Nari, catching the moonlight from where they’d embedded themselves in her hair and in her clothes.

“Hold still and let me brush it off,” Sehun said, frowning and reaching for her shoulder, but she shoved him off.

“No, it’s fine. It doesn’t matter. It won’t all come off anyway.” She batted his insistent hand away. “Let’s just find somewhere to sleep for the night. It’s getting dark out, and all we’ll accomplish is walking ourselves into the cops’ hands at this rate.”

But my parents will get worried if I don’t come home, he realized with a twinge of guilt. Yet somehow he knew he couldn’t go home, couldn’t leave Nari alone in the woods tonight of all nights.

“Alright,” he said. Turning from her, he squinted at a line of trees in the distance. “If we get deep enough into the forest, we should be safe from the police when they arrive at the prison.”

She nodded, gesturing for him to lead the way. They walked in silence for a few minutes, neither knowing what to say now that the impossible had been done, their mission completed. Sehun finally worked up the courage to break the silence when they were within a few paces of the treeline.

“Where are you off to next, then? Now that you’ve recovered the diamond?”

She hummed quietly, eyes distant. “Myanmar, maybe. Depends on who I can get to sneak me out of Korea. Thailand, if I can’t find a boat to Myanmar.”

“Hm.” Sehun felt strangely empty. “I’ve heard Bali is nice at this time of year.”

She made a noncommittal sound in the back of . “Mm. Maybe.” They were in the forest now, climbing over wayward tree trunks and rocks, and they both quieted again to focus on not tripping in the dark. The forest floor was horribly tangled and overgrown, leaving little space to step and balance.

“I think we’re far enough in now,” Sehun ventured to say after a couple minutes. “No one ever comes here. The police won’t bother searching this far.”

“Okay.”

They sat down against a large tree, curling into the space between its roots and the ground. Laying down, Sehun pulled his knees up to his chest to make space for Nari and closed his eyes, suddenly exhausted. The stress and exertion of the day had caught up with him abruptly, making him drowsy. Or perhaps the sudden sleepiness was from the sharp little prick he had felt earlier when they had crossed the treeline and Nari’s hand had ghosted over his shoulder.

“Nari,” he mumbled, struggling to keep his eyelids from closing, “will you still be here when I wake up? I still hav

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vampwrrr
#1
Chapter 2: Reading this is so stressful. I'm thoroughly terrified for Sehunie.
HanMyung
#2
Chapter 3: I am actually pretty contented by the ending. Though it did no good to my curiosity of what happened to Nari at the end... I loved it. Nari's character is full of mystery and the impact she had on Sehun even after he moved on with his life... Beautiful. Thank you for such a nice story ^^
LittleBabyBreath
#3
Chapter 3: im confuse... someone please sends help
Taninnocent
#4
wow!nice story!
SeKai94 #5
Chapter 3: Holy crap wow I’m stunned ... loved how Sehun has his own ending too but I rly still wonder if Nari is 19 as she said
Loveukworld
#6
Chapter 3: Oh God!!!!! poor sehun.. TT .. Why did she ditch him.. Gosh..
Loveukworld
#7
Oh Gog ! I just completed reading Of Labs and Love Songs... and i am way too excited for this fic ...XD
damiwon
#8
Chapter 3: OMG WHY ISNT THIS MORE POPULAR THIS WAS AN ADVENTURE FROM START TO THE END! LOVED IT
Searingblaze000
#9
Chapter 3: To me, this is a coming of age story, of heartbreak and growth after loss... through Sehun's interaction with Nari, he gets to know about a world that had, until then, existed far beyond his daily life. And through her, he finds about the ruthless and unjust world where nobody gets any redemption or second chances. I think his time at the prison marks his journey from boyhood to manhood... and that is why the creek holds such importance for him.

Nari is quite a unique character. Conwoman caught up in the midst of triad wars. Sehun's right, chances of her survival are low but she's smart. Maybe she did make it? I'm sure she too remembers Sehun, as the naive boy who helped her escape. I think she enjoyed his naivete and tried not to tarnish it too much, though ultimately it was unavoidable :)

It was a wonderful experience, reading it. Good job :)
Searingblaze000
#10
Chapter 2: Sehun's confusion and the moral/ethical dilemma is conveyed very well.