Prologue

텐데… (Timeless)
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PROLOGUE

 

South Korea;30th Mac 2015;Wong Yukhei POV;1515

“Xuxiiiiiiiiii”

 A soft voice called out Lucas’s real name as he was just packing up his backpack when school finally ended for today. Turned out it was his best friend since crib, Kim Jungwoo, a sophomore at Seoul District High school. He’s one year older than Lucas but he looked way younger than Lucas. “ah hyung, wait a minute I needed to clean the class for today. It’s my turn today.” Lucas grunted deeply as Jungwoo only nodded his head, smiling widely as his bunny teeth seem visible from where he is standing, in the corridor to be exact. Maybe Lucas is just some observant dude but whatever he brushed off his thought as he gets up, walking over to the blackboard as he started cleaning all the writing on it. He just wants to go home and sleep to be honest, the last period which is chemistry literally killing his sanity. But he knew Jungwoo won’t let him sleep as he’ll forced him to do his homework first. Next, he grabbed the broom before sweeping off the dust particle, cleaning the floor with his responsibility or he was just forced to do it. “hey stopped it!”

Lucas heard Jungwoo hyung shrieked, he knew the older voice really well. “hyung?!”

He called out for Jungwoo only to earn a silent. Uneasy feeling creeped in as he walked out to see Jungwoo with puffed out cheeks, squinted eyes. Staring straight to Johnny’s mischievous grin when Johnny, their senior held up Jungwoo’s soft red bean bun, teasing the sophomore. “Give me backkkkkk” Jungwoo whined only to make the taller guy chuckled. “aww look at this” Lucas interrupted both of his friends before snatching the red bean bun off Johnny’s hand. Despite he’s a junior but he’s taller than Jungwoo nor Johnny (“only one centimetre okay!! Johnny’s always shouted that). The red bean bun in his hand, a smug grin plastered on Lucas’s handsome face. He got zero intention to help Jungwoo at first because he loved teasing the Korean boy. “Xuxiiiiiii!!!”

Jungwoo whined again as the two taller guys . But….

The voice getting slower, the tune getting lower, is it Lucas’s ears? Did Jungwoo stopped whining? Where’s Johnny hyung?

Lucas looked to his side where Johnny supposed to be there but only see nothing. It’s impossible for Johnny to run that quick because the staircase is next to Lucas so he should at least have passed him to run to the stairs- “Jungwoo?!” Lucas turned his head to see Jungwoo was nowhere to be found. “Jungwoo hyung?!” He called out the older’s name. “Jungwoo- “Lucas suddenly lost his body balance as he fell on his back.

 

 

 

 

 

South Korea;30th Mac 2015;Kim Jungwoo POV;0715

“Jungwoo hyung!

Lucas’s deep voice woke Jungwoo up from his daydreaming while he was waiting for his best friend since he

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ariastotle
okay bih i mean babies <33333 this is the first update pheww i did it in a week. do enjoy and yes i guess that's it. i love you guys!! no homo cause we are two bros chilling in a hot tub 5 ft away cause we are not gay HAHA

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kim_infinite
#1
Chapter 1: ooofff interestingggg
foxinabox
#2
Chapter 1: it sounds like you have a good plot going on where you might be needing this more for yourself rather than having this be a creative result of a thought. I agree with the comment about the dialogue but that can be easily tweaked. my creative writing professor taught me this and it stuck with me, long before I took the class but sharpened my skills further: "dont say it; show it." show me the background scene, even if it lacks importance. show me how he walked into the room or how that bread looks; is it browned? did it get burned or is it undercooked? is he holding the food with his bare hand or does it have a wrapper? being able to show all of this without directly saying what it is (dont say he held the burnt bread through the plastic wrap; use your imagination!), can and will take you a long way. you can do this and it'll make you more invested in the writing, and the readers in the reading for the fact that you are painting the picture for them, and telling them what to see. I hope that makes sense? just ask me later if not lol. but you're off to a good start, love <3
mostluda
#3
Chapter 1: ok 1! ! my comments might b wrong bcs english isn't my first language. but this is for u <33 3 3
when writing your paragraphs don't include multiple dialogues into it. when a new person speaks make it into a new paragraph and continue on :0 i rlly like it BB <33