텐데… (Timeless)

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Description

(oof I’m with describing but I’ll try my best)

 

Story about a group of high schooler in Seoul District High School.

Yes, high schoolers, high school, students, homework, romance, teachers, clique, betrayal.

Romance,homophobic,heterouality,biuality. Even death.

It all happened in Seoul District High School where ;

Kim Jungwoo , Wong Yukhei are enrolled together with their new friends without knowing what is going to happened. Two best friend falling in love, cliché for normal heteroual people in Seoul homophobic community. But not for homoual people to breath they already hating them.

Let’s find out how these high schoolers escaping harsh reality of their neighbourhood.

How the foreigners going to survives among the Koreans’ homophobic thought?

How a Korean going to face his challenge?

It is High School. Place where we will learn everything new. Yet we can’t change the mind-set of our surrounding.

They smile through the pain, the smile through the insult but will they smile for their own happiness??

It is 텐데… (Timeless)"

 

Foreword

Disclaimer : I wrote this on 30th Mac 2018, in the evening after a long time not having my laptop with me and not reading any fanfiction because i have been nusy with life orz life kkkkk. not copying anything so please shut up.

inspired : how im still thinking do i like boys or girls or both and should i come out of my closet??

characters : Kim Jungwoo, Wong Yukhei, Nakamoto Yuta, Chittaphon Leechaiyakul, Lee Taeyong, Seo Youngho and many more coming. I DID NOT OWN ANY OF THEM

Genre: mystery, romance, angst, fluff, supermatural (because it has angel and demon) 

warning :

1) THIS STORY IS NOT RELATED TO ANYONE.IT CAN BE THE MOST NONSENSE STORY YOU EVER READ. DONT LIKE PLEASE UNSUBSCRIBE. I JUST WANT A SERIOUS READER.

2) CHARACTER DEATH. DONT LIKE PLEASE LEAVE.

3) HOMOPHOBIC AND BASHING MIGHT OCCURED. THIS IS A STORY ABOUT UALITY PROBLEM BUT IT DOESNT CONTAIN

4) ENGLISH IS NOT MY MOTHER LANGUAGE

 

i was hoping that after you read this, you'd agree to anything that happened in this story, only happened in this story.

and do leave a comment or any suggestion especially chaaracters suggestions. i'd love to use your ideas as well. with credit of course.

please enjoy. you have been warned.

 

ariastotle

ariastotle
okay bih i mean babies <33333 this is the first update pheww i did it in a week. do enjoy and yes i guess that's it. i love you guys!! no homo cause we are two bros chilling in a hot tub 5 ft away cause we are not gay HAHA

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kim_infinite
#1
Chapter 1: ooofff interestingggg
foxinabox
#2
Chapter 1: it sounds like you have a good plot going on where you might be needing this more for yourself rather than having this be a creative result of a thought. I agree with the comment about the dialogue but that can be easily tweaked. my creative writing professor taught me this and it stuck with me, long before I took the class but sharpened my skills further: "dont say it; show it." show me the background scene, even if it lacks importance. show me how he walked into the room or how that bread looks; is it browned? did it get burned or is it undercooked? is he holding the food with his bare hand or does it have a wrapper? being able to show all of this without directly saying what it is (dont say he held the burnt bread through the plastic wrap; use your imagination!), can and will take you a long way. you can do this and it'll make you more invested in the writing, and the readers in the reading for the fact that you are painting the picture for them, and telling them what to see. I hope that makes sense? just ask me later if not lol. but you're off to a good start, love <3
mostluda
#3
Chapter 1: ok 1! ! my comments might b wrong bcs english isn't my first language. but this is for u <33 3 3
when writing your paragraphs don't include multiple dialogues into it. when a new person speaks make it into a new paragraph and continue on :0 i rlly like it BB <33