Washed Up Affection

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"Absence makes the heart grow fonder." Minhee learned not to believe in such things; they only lead to hurt in the end. She was foolish to think her neediness and simple admiration were love at all. Those childish days never meant anything when she and Junmyeon never understood what "love" truly is. Like ocean waves, these simple and shallow attractions were only as fleeting.

Formerly titled: Ocean Waves

Foreword

"They froze from the sudden, soft contact. It seemed like they were in their own world at that moment. The sound of the party was blocked out as the wind comfortingly blew past their faces. Although, it wasn't quite a kiss; this feathery contact was just as electrifying.

Minhee hugged herself as that memory made her heart flutter. She touched her burning cheeks as she continued looking up at Junmyeon's picture. Even today, the memory still brought that electric feeling."

This is my submission for heclgehog's Open Writing Club Week 1 Prompt.

Author's Thoughts
Bana_Bana
Well, so much for a two-part fic. Let's see if I can contain it within three parts. ;^]
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lucidhoney10 #1
Chapter 2: Yeay... As expected, this is so neat... I can clearly imagine the whole things that you tried to potrays, the emotions also got into me...
This is beautiful, really...
Good job author-nim!
upgrader #2
Chapter 1: This was written so beautifully, I really enjoyed it. You did a great job evoking emotionality from Minhee, and how she held onto the friendship and hope she felt spending time with Junmyeon in the past. There was a hazy, nostalgic feel that made it an easy and heart-warming read. Also, love that Minhee's in Texas lol that's where I live!!
lucidhoney10 #3
Chapter 1: It's so neat... I really like your writing style.
You also describe things in a good flow. This make a good start... I am looking forward to the next update.
amusingmurdermachine #4
Well written. Structurally and technically I noticed no problems upon reading once. Very nice emotions to it too.
Based on this I think your readers have really nice updates to look forward to :)
OnceUponAnEXO 18 streak #5
Chapter 1: Oooh (/♥ω♥)/ this is really good so far! Can't wait for the second part!!
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