Chapter 1: I really like reading this fanfic! :DDD I really like how this fanfic varies from all the other fanfics about love; I like how how it stays true to its genre and tags; and I absolutely like the plot twist! I just like all of them, it is really amazing!

I was a bit doubtful when I saw that it was ‘thriller’, tbh. XP But now I see I stood corrected, and that you delivered the thrill and excitement well! Everything makes sense in the end, and there wasn’t really any plot holes to be spotted.

I absolutely love this fanfic. It’s absolute amazing, well-written, and good plot! This is an awesome fanfic, I absolutely love it! <3

Chapter 1: --spoiler alert--
I'm just gonna throw in my thoughts while I was reading:
-The setting was very well described. You have good command of the language.
-First sentence is quite long. Could have been cut like: "...sticky layer of sweat. She's not only bothered..."
-"He would probably ______ in Wendy's room"? i think you forgot the verb?
-I also think things tied up pretty fast? felt a little bit rushed towards the end as opposed to the setting in the beginning which was described quite meticulously
-So yeah wow the mystery tag really intrigued me so kudos to you for your refreshing interpretation on the prompt. Though imo it might have made just a tiny bit more of an impact if Irene actually felt a little something for the imaginary guy too at some point

I actually read this days ago when I saw you link your story at the Open Writing Club comment box so I don't know if you had done some editing since then.
Anyway, looking forward to your next entries! :)

Chapter 1: This is a really interesting take on the prompt (^.^)b I like that it wasn't just a simple confession and had some intrigue and suspense added in. Very cool idea!

Chapter 1: I admire your dedication to the #aesthetics but I did have to use Readability mode in order to read the story. If you're going to use a layout, using one with a larger font might be a better choice.

Overall, this story was a wild ride. I was all ready for it to be a demon or something, only for it to go stalker, and then be hallucinations. I really like stories and twists like this and you did well. You kept up the momentum up until the end, where the big a-ha reveal was a little too soon. I thought it was amazing for you to come up with a story like this based off of the prompt and really admire you for that. There were some grammatical mistakes but it wasn't distracting. I liked the story a lot you did a great job! I also loved detective Seulgi and how you wrote Irene's character.