ACT TWO. ENOUEMENT

In Love With A Legacy
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ACT TWO. ENOUEMENT.

Enouement. /'eh-now-ment'/. The bittersweetness of arriving at the future, seeing how things turn out, but not being able to tell your past self.

 

 

Lee Saeran is twenty minutes late.

This should no longer be an issue, given her lamentable inclination towards habitual tardiness. Jinyoung, however, has yet to repress idle expectations of Saeran caring for his time enough to care for how long it is she’s kept him waiting.

“That’s the twenty-first minute I’ve wasted and am never getting back,” Jinyoung grumbles to himself. “Thanks, Saeran-ah. I knew I could count on you and your lack of common courtesy.”

As if on cue, Jinyoung espies Saeran’s figure in the distance, racing clumsily towards him as fast her feet can carry her.

“Soonyoung-ah!” she exclaims, her way of address disarming him temporarily. “There you are.”

I have yet to get used to that name, Jinyoung thinks. Or, to the chilling reality that I’ve hijacked someone else’s identity.

This pains Jinyoung, despite knowing he’s had little choice in the matter. Between impersonating Soonyoung and risking premature exposure, he’d opt for the former no matter the circumstance.

Blood is thicker than water, after all.

“I’ve been looking all over for you,” Saeran says, resting both hands on either knee, still gasping for air. “I circled the block thrice in succession, and I’ve nearly gotten myself run over by a pickup truck.”

Jinyoung is beyond delighted to have known that Saeran did not, in fact, mean to waste his time.

Having put herself at risk, however, was a thousand times more worrisome than anything.

“Look to either side of you,” he says softly. “Before crossing the road. You should know that by now.”

Saeran blinks at him for a moment, as if to ascertain the proper response.

After a moment, she smiles, and the look on her face melts Jinyoung’s insides spontaneously.

How are you this beautiful? He thinks.

And why am I this hurt to have to meet you like this?

Now that you’re someone else’s.

And now that I’m someone else.

“For how long, exactly?” Jinyoung inquires.

“How long what?”

“How long have you been looking for me.”

“Twenty minutes?” Saeran responds, sparing her timepiece a cursory glance. “Give or take.”

“Good girl,” Jinyoung says, unable to resist a half-smile. He reaches out to Saeran, who stills upon contact. Golden locks of hair tumble forwards, the alluring scent of her perfume infused with bergamot and musk, cashmere wood and morning sunshine.

Jinyoung discovers he has difficulties breathing, as if she’s stolen the air right out of him.

“Where to?” she asks, eyes gleaming in earnest.

Jinyoung smiles, fighting the unbearable urge to take her hand in his, hold her in his arms, and kiss her by way of confession.

Behave yourself, Jinyoung-ah, he chides. You can’t possibly have what is already taken.

“Your call,” he says. “I’ll go wherever it is your heart wishes to take you.”

“Somewhere close-by, then,” she smiles, scanning the vicinity. “I have another appointment to attend to this afternoon.”

 “Appointment…?” Jinyoung asks, easing hesitantly into the matter.

“Yeah,” she responds, clapping both hands together. “I’m fitting my wedding dress today.”

Without even knowing it, Saeran steps on Jinyoung’s heart and stomps it flat.

Wedding dress, he thinks.

Right. This girl I’m in love with…

She’s getting married in four months’ time.

“Is that so,” Jinyoung whispers, half-adrift in a tunnel of despair. “Congratulations.”

“Stop that,” Saeran laughs, elbowing Jinyoung lightly. “I can tell by the look on your face, you know. You tire of saying those things, even more so than I’ve tired of hearing them.”

“Sorry,” he mutters. “Force of habit.”

Saeran’s eyes flit about him, surveying the locale.

They’re standing at the heart of the Myeongdeong Shopping Street, littered with outlets and boutiques, market stalls and indoor diners. The intersection itself is swamped with visitors, whose faces are buried either in their mobile phones, or are busy browsing through the shops down the road. 

“Say, Soonyoung-ah,” she tells him. “I might know of a place we can hang out.”

She takes him by the hand, unaware of the repercussions.

The voluntary skinship has—as can be expected—an utterly profound effect on Bae Jinyoung.

He recoils, pulling his hand away.

“What’s wrong?” she asks, hurt and confusion flashing in her expression momentarily.

“Sorry, I—“ Jinyoung begins. “That… might be dangerous.”

“Ah,” Saeran exclaims, flashing him a melancholy smile. “I get it. I’ll be more careful.”

She turns around, and Jinyoung follows suit, trailing the path her footsteps have taken. Minutes later, they arrive at a small café, a hole-in-the-wall obscured partly from view by the vast plethora of larger businesses swarming with curious patrons.

 “Over here.”

Through the glass door, Jinyoung sees the whimsical décor and the fanciful set-pieces furnishing the shop’s rustic interior. Laden with flowers, oaken tables, and ornamental greenery, the shop invokes a sense of strange familiarity, wistful nostalgia Jinyoung has long since forgotten.

He realizes he’s been here before.

“Spring Blossom Cafe?” Jinyoung chuckles. “Wow, Saeran-ah. I find myself in constant awe of your astonishing originality. Or lack, thereof.”

“Why complain?” she teases, shoving him gently forwards. “You used to love it here.”

“When we were seven,” he clarifies. “At that age, we still made bubbles with our mouths for the heck of it.”

 “Back then, they served us custard sugar rolls with piping hot chocolate,” Saeran recalls. “It was funny, now that I remember it. The granules of sugar would stick to your chin because of how messily you scarfed down the food.”

“My mouth is small,” Jinyoung argues. “It happens.”

“And then, you and I drifted apart for about a decade,” Saeran adds. “How is it that you’ve come to track me down, anyway? You can’t have imagined my surprise at the office upon receiving a message from an unknown sender claiming to have known me since we were children.”

Jinyoung fidgets nervously, unsure of what to say next.

I found your brother’s journal, pages strewn across my desk. 

He left it there by accident—unnamed, unmarked—for what reason, exactly?

Only goodness knows what.

In singling out the owner, I had to utilize my capacities. 

Psychometry: extrasensory perception, the ability to infiltrate someone else’s past, by making physical contact with an associated object.

And then, I simply… got more than I’d bargained for.

You. Your job at Sports One, your contact details printed onto your business card. As if Daehwi’s journal was yours instead of his.

 “Daehwi,” Jinyoung begins, fiddling with his thumbs uncomfortably. “Has a copy of the latest Yearbook. Your digits were written into the Student Directory.”

Saeran makes an awed expression with , enlightened by the revelation, untrue as it may be.

 “You and I were destined to reconnect, then,” she laughs. “See? Reminiscence is sweet, every so often.”

She steps into the café, a cheerful attendant greeting her with a smile at the door.

“Good afternoon, madam,” she says. “Welcome to the Spring Blossom Café.”

Both Jinyoung and Saeran bow at her politely.

 “The usual spot?” Jinyoung muses, willing away the disgrace eating slowly into his broken conscience. He gestures to the table farthest from the entrance, nearest to the rear-most window.

“The usual spot,” Saeran agrees, sauntering over to the table, as if to reunite with a long-lost friend. “The scenery’s changed a bit, hasn’t it?”

“Instead of the pawnshop,” Jinyoung muses. “It was a dessert parlour.”

“Remember the bearded, pot-bellied uncle manning the register?” Saeran asks, arranging her skirt before she settles onto the hardwood chair. “He kept on topping our sundae with rainbow sprinkles, even though both of us heavily disliked the taste of them.”

“Still do,” Jinyoung shrugs. “I avoid the shavings from hell like the plague.”

“You know what hasn’t changed?” Saeran smiles, eyes glinting in euphoria. “The view from across the table.”

Jinyoung’s heart flutters into violent motion, skipping in beat two at a time.

Before he can formulate a suitable response, he overhears faint, eager whispering a couple tables down, just as the door to the café creaks audibly open.

“Speak of the devil,” Jinyoung mutters under his breath. “The actual devil.”

“A dashing devil,” Saeran corrects. “I do like that hairstyle on him.”

Saeran waves a hand at their surprise visitor, grinning delightedly from ear to ear.

 “Seongwoo-oppa!” she calls out. “Over here.”

Seongwoo establishes eye-contact with the both of them, eyes darting briefly from one to the other.

“Ahh,” he exclaims. “So this is the person you’ve been meeting behind my back.”

He strolls over to their table, gait exuding confidence, his herringbone trench coat swishing to and fro behind him.

 “Hi there,” he greets. “Bae Soonyoung, am I right?”

Wrong, Jinyoung thinks.

“Right,” he says aloud. “I’m, uhh… a friend of Saeran’s. From childhood.”

“I know,” he says. “She’s mentioned you, once or twice. More than that, actually. More than I care to admit.”

Jinyoung nods curtly, suppressing a frown. His expression turns sour imperceptibly, as though he’s toeing the line between disgust and constipation.

“I could have sworn your name was different though,” Saeran muses. “Was it… Jinseok? Jooyoung?”

Panic rises like bile to Jinyoung’s throat, choking out the words he’s never meant to say.

“You’ve forgotten,” he lies, almost as if duplicity has become second nature. “Twelve years have passed since then, after all.”

“You’re right,” she agrees, rubbing her temple. “Ahh, my head hurts.”

“You alright?” Seongwoo asks, gently her hair. Saeran leans in towards him, resting her fair head of hair against his abdomen.

 “This is why I keep on telling you not to go out and about unnecessarily,” Seongwoo scolds. “Your health is of primary concern these days.”

“Don’t say it like that,” Saeran giggles, burying her face in the folds of Seongwoo’s overcoat. “Soonyoung might think you’ve gotten me pregnant.”

“We get hitched first,” Seongwoo chuckles. “And then we’ll talk.”

He crouches forwards, planting a kiss upon the tip of Saeran’s nose.

Jinyoung’s insides churn like butter, and he is forced to look away from the sight of them.

“I’ll leave you two for the moment,” Seongwoo says then. “I’ve dropped by simply to make sure my fiancée hasn’t been spirited away before our wedding.”

Jinyoung’s left eye twitches in

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Ongniel is served dearest readers~ I hope you like this chapter, Romeong and Daliet are fun to write for <3

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Bunnyhop70
#1
Omg. This seems so interesting. Thank you for your stories!
Baechaengie
#2
Chapter 3: Chapter 3: ONGNIEL IS SCIENCE~
jopiety
#3
Chapter 3: If you're majoring ing Eng Lit too,, I'm not sure if you will love Shakespeare... Try to read the original works and even with enormous dictionaries around,, I literally bled my brain out to understand his works...
But okay, maybe my brain is not in the capacity in understanding old english..
But indeed, those ancient literally works are beyond fascinating once you understand them...

I would patiently read to see the development of ongniel's relation here..
It's interesting to see how later they would solve problem with saeran... And together with her, of course, about daehwi and jinyoung... XD
u_are_cute
#4
Chapter 3: YOUR NUMBER 1 HYPE WOMAN IN THE HOUSE OMG I’LL COMMENT HERE FOR NOW HAHAHAHAHAA

I AMMM SO INTRIGUED LIKE REALLY INTRIGUED ABOUT ONGNIEL’S STORY

Gosh,if this would happen in real life...it would be REAAALLLY hard. They’re enemies but then they love each other...complicated,huh? I love the deep conversations between them!

And it’s fascinating how they all seemed to connect on each other.Like,Daehwi knowing Daniel and Seongwoo marrying Daehwi’s sister...I am amazed.

AND OMG DANIEL WALKED AWAY WHY WHY WHY but yeah i understand why...If I was him,I’ll also walk away hahaha

As usual,you did a good job unnie! Thank you for the update!
heartykeykeke
#5
Finally able to read the whole chapter.been Reading bits and pieces sorry for the delay. Hope your tests, studies and writing are going well. I applaud you first for updating so fast. This is a record! I think it's better than waiting and doing areally long one. There is a lot of content with each couple to sort through honestly.

Before we go into what I think of Jinyoung. When it was said, Ong. I raised my hand and nearly shouted I volunteer on the bus ha ha. I like him so far in this story though it's weird to think of these guys as het. Now my imagining went to dif places whereas it's usually just Ongniel...I wonder if Ong would be a good lover with girls? I know I have written about it a bit but it's still hard to picture for me.

Back to Bae. So far him and Guanlin really interest me. It's a cool concept for him. I like the idea of him covering for his brother, secretly pining, being an awesome spy like halcker, hiding his Identity. I'm interested in these complex relationships. No couple is a given and it seems like they won't have an easy time getting together. Love square with the maknaes. Daehwi has my fav power. that's funny how they don't like each other like that but the vision must make them see each other dif. And the fact Dae looks similar to his sister has got to be complicated for Bae. That would really mess with my mind if my friend looked like Ong.

It seems like you have a thing about making Jaehwi get together through heartbreak and Dae being the first to fall in love. I like this concept though. Sort of fits them and seems like howpeople they got together in real life.

Holy crap, that was the best ending to a chapter!!!! Why did he kiss him back hmm? He has hidden feelings he's been denying? Is it just because he looks like his sister? Why did Dae initiate it tho too? I wonder if he cannot fight what happens in his visions or just doesn't try to change it or has he been secretly harboring feelings for him too? Gah I have to know what happens next!

As usual, I like the update. I think this may end up being my favorite couple. Then again though there's others and there is def going to bed Ongniel which you are fantastic at writing I don't think you even know girl. But sort of sad Ong is in a political marriage and her booooo. Hey it's sort of opposite of Yes Sir. Only this girl seems sweet so it will be difficult to break them up. another boo hoo. Just hot to wait and see what happens.

To clarify, not everyone will be legacies with special powers then? Because it seems like maybe Woojin and Bae don't have powers hmm....

Good luck with everything, especially your future updates and interviews! Really looking forward to it~
jopiety
#6
Chapter 2: Awww....
So jinyoung is bewitched by daehwi's kiss??
Ahahaha...
It must feel so great to give in and even pull the smaller closer like that...
Kekekeke

These two are just so cuteeeeee....
jopiety
#7
Chapter 1: awww.....
i'm seeing lots of great literary workss....
are you studying literature too??
your words are classy....

so.... guanlin-jihoon had something in their past....
and at the moment,, they are actually in the same college...
and what a savage jihoon... hahahaha... it's cute btw...

yet this time, guanlin's power is useless for jihoon... hmmm... interesting~~~

aww... and i'm surprised to see my name there...kekekekekek...
thanks dear.. i love talking to you too...
and i'm really grateful for your help :)
heartykeykeke
#8
Chapter 1: Love this first chapter. Ugh my writing pales to yours and it's frustrating. I love reading your things but it also puts me in. Bind when it comes to my own writing. You make me recall words I haven't seen in years. Like thicket and foliage haha. I should increase my vocab from you, embarrassing as it is as a native speaker. You clearly have read a lot of literature. Do you have a list of ginormous descriptive words to use? Jelly of your abilities. Wish I could write more like you. Sometimes I read your chapters and I want to go scrap all my garbage stories or rewrite half of it so it sounds more poetic. Got me thinking what is my strength and should I even be writing? I guess that you make me compare and second guess myself is a compliment to you. Since I have been writing fan fics for a long time.

Anyays, not sure what to say about this chapter besides it's intriguing. I like the dark angsty mood. I like that the couple has a tragic complex connection and it's not love at first sight. It's interesting his powers didn't work. I wonder what J's power is. Guanlin is pretty cool and bad . I think his powper is really useful. I thought the nightmare was a dream of them in a past life but now I'm not sure if it was their childhood? I will have to wait and see about this mystery. And poor Jae getting rejected by Min. I'm glad G uses his powers for good to help people. And it's sweet how he protects Jihoon from the side like he couldn't stay out of his life since he cares so much. He fails as a ninja though.

Great job. Looking forward to more!
heartykeykeke
#9
Oh seems very interesting. Different mood so far. Loving the idea of supernatural and mysteries and nepar death experiences and Kings and Shakespeare. Seems like you're trying to put a bunch of different elements in. It will probably be difficult to write down the road but I think it will be awesome because it will be unique to the wanna one fic world. You go do you. I'm looking forward to the first chapter! Good choice with Ongnielette there lol. I have a soft spot for Daliette and Romeong
jopiety
#10
I bet this will be interesting...
Dont tell me the alchemist is guanlin??
#I.am.just.a.fan.who.love.to.make.theories.and.wild.guesses