PERFECT

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Jongdae and minseok have been going out for about 7 years now.it was a perfect love story isn't it. But recently things have gone wrong. Recently minseok didnt seem like jongdae's minseokie . It was clear that minseok is cheating over jongdae and even if Jongdae doesn't want to believe it , the proofs are just  to many for him to neglect. Minseok doesn't spend time with jongdae as he did before. he was always busy for jongdae working on a case .He doesn't call jongdae the way he used to. Minseok's cheek's always had faint marks of  cheap lipstick now. Minseok is always on his phone. And he always talk about this 'anna'  in his sleep. Every night minseok came home drunk for the past few weeks smelling like alcohol and cheap female perfume . Kim jongdae finds the love of his life cheating on him.was Kim minseok really cheating on him??did he have his reasons

Foreword

"Perfect" Is my first fanfic that I had guts to publish. Before it I wrote many but didn't have enough confidence to publish . I have also published this book on wattpad.i really hope you guys like this book. This book is the start for my other books . So please support them too !! Thank you !!

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FlowerBaozi #1
Chapter 10: Noice. Really nice. Thank u
Crazyformusic101 #2
Thank u so much !!!!
izy_angelic #3
Chapter 10: I am not a great author myself but I could say, you have a great plot. It's good and you should continue writing. All you have to do is a bit editing here and there. Anyways, great job. And good luck!
♡~♡
izy_angelic #4
Chapter 3: Awww... T.T sad Jongdae is a no no
Meendaes #5
Chapter 10: You should continue writing.. you are good at this. Good luck
Chileangirl #6
Chapter 10: Hi there, good plot in this story, you should keep on writing more. That's the only way to improve. Also, I was mad at Min for cheating on Jongdae but then everything made sense, you got me there with the twist.
I would recommend you to separe your writing into more paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Perhaps separating the dialogues from the description of the characters like:
It's okay Dae, no one is at fault - Minseaok said and he cuddle next to Jongdae.
#JustSaying #Iwanted2Help #Fighting
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