swim farther, while I keep the currents

Please Subscribe to read further chapters

Description

She who sits so poised on her abalone throne can't help but smile in regret when she stains pearl hearts with malicious intent.

By and by, Joohyun floats right into Seulgi's arms to ask a favor of her black magic - and though Seulgi knows she must charge a price to break the beautiful girl, she finds that she'd rather not let her go, either.

Foreword

Right on. This is a little story I'm putting up for the Reveur Writing Contest - which I find to be write up my alley (I'm sorry, pun intended) because it's exclusively /yuri. They got some really sweet looking graphic prompts within the fairytale type genre and it's just - go check it out. It's for EXO, BTS and Red Velvet only.

No lie. It's nice.

 

Gladwere
I finally got my together and put up a chapter for this, so - look! It's finally happening! Y'all! There's something here *other* than the description! W h a t ?

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
St-renaissance
#1
I’m kinda intimidated to read this now, after going through the comments people seem to like it very much. Imma get comfortable and start reading this :)
Freespiritttt
#2
Chapter 2: I've just subscribed this story and I got captivated almost in a second after reading it. Wow, where have I been all this time? hahaha
Well, I must say that I really like your writing style! The way you described these characters was so great! The twist to the original folk is really refreshing! I mean, there must be a reason for everything, even for whatever the 'wrongdoings' so-called villains do, right? Because I still absolutely believe that villains are those good guys stricken with a very bad luck hahaha
Anyway, the curiosity is building up, man! I'm looking forward to see how Seulrene will interact with each other given that this time around, no Yeri to prevent everything from turning South (Or she might pop out of nowhere in Seulgi's case asap after realizing that the princess might be there all along with the witch.) Oh and about Seulgi's human form, I'm kind of wondering, is that really her actual form? (That she has somewhat had the ability of shapeshifting, I believe she can, she is a witch for godsake, but to what extent I couldn't figure it out) or is it what Seulgi wants Joohyun to 'see'? Like basically, she is under her spell since Joohyun desires to have legs like humans do?
Woah, there are so many interesting parts! Kudos to you!
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed this so far and do take your time in updating. After all, writing is all about enjoyment, right? :))
PS. And oh my God, your story is really well-written. Good luck in winning the contest though, you really deserve more recognition! ^^
seriously_2016 #3
Chapter 2: So just stared this AND IT'S SO AMAZING BLOODY HELL I LOVE IT - I mean, firstly, WHAT A TWIST on the classic little mermaid story I am so weak for reluctant villains who are more the anti-hero type. This is perfect - humanising the 'villain'...i just...it's awesome.
Oh and also, you are SO SO GOOD AT WRITING HOW DARE YOU BRING YO-SELF DOWN LIKE THAT...more self-love <3<3<3 legit the way you described 'human' seulgi was really well detailed - I loved it (and I am usually a tad harsh with these things - I am not one for dishing out compliments if they are unjustified lol)
And tbh I would prefer to wait and get an amazing update than have you stressed about it because writing should be something you enjoy - your life comes first hehe
Anyway, ramble over - very much looking forward to the next update and hopefully you have some other stories I can check out in the meantime :)) <3
Sydney_riddle #4
Chapter 2: This is pretty entertaining so far. Looking forward to more!
serendipityalone #5
Chapter 2: Woah, this really cool and well-written. Different take on The Little Mermaid.
leave_me_alone
#6
Chapter 2: for s sake, if this is 'poorly written' then you should reevaluate the stuff I write, bc this is great take as much time as you need
_kin18 #7
Chapter 1: interesting so far will definitely keep reading!! please bring seulrene together soon ;))))))))
leave_me_alone
#8
Chapter 1: oh-
oHmYgOd
this is amazing
Seulgistongue #9
Chapter 1: hOly this is a cool concept IM EXCITEDHDDDP
lovelvet
#10
Chapter 1: Hello! I would just like to comment that THIS IS RLY GOOD!! HUHUHU it's really well-written and the plot sounds so different from other fics which is rly awesome!! Thank you for writing and sharing this chapter! Looking forward for more!! :D

P.s. was this inspired by "The Little Mermaid"? huhuhu it's so nice and creative aaaAAAAA