Chapter 1: THIS IS SO SWEET. thank you for writing this. it was so true to life (well ykwim as close to it as we can get by mere conjecture) and so nicely constructed.
Chapter 1: This is... so soft... I really like how you bring out the differences in their personalities yet they fit well with each other.
This line though '"i'd say get a room to you two, but... y'know." joohyun sighs in defeat.' hehe
Chapter 1: ummm u seem like an expert on wenseul dynamics to me??? like this was so nice to read im honestly softly sobbing rn (also im very late to the party for this fic oops). incorporating the little things that they’ve mentioned in shows/interviews gives this story—idk how to explain it? realism may be the phrase im looking for?—like i just see this happening with them, it just seems very natural for this series of events to happen. this is soft n pure and i feel blessed to even be able to read it! so thanks for writing and posting :)
This was beautiful. You incorporated the bits and pieces of their relationship we've come to know (the "opposites attract", the "we fight and a day later at worst we get sad and apologise", ecc.) very well. This story is super sweet, though I believe with ws it's a given :)
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