Your Smile Is Sweeter Than (Hot) Chocolate

Description

Jaebum brings Youngjae to a coffee shop for some hot chocolate, and they end up getting Jinyoung instead.

Basically, the JJP coffeeshop/kidfic mashup au no one asked for.

Foreword

Hello everyone! I'm back! It turns out that I actually started this fic in April of last year, and I just finished it now. Yay me!! Anyway, I meant for this to be a nice, short and sweet 3k coffee shop au, and here we are 10 months later with a 12k monster instead.

Youngjae is 5 years old in this, so if his speech seems a little gramatically incorrect, that was intentional. Honestly, I'm not really sure how well 5-year-olds speak, so I hope it feels realistic. I put a lot of effort into finishing this, especially in the last few weeks, because I really wanted to upload something again. So I hope it turned out okay! And in the future, stay tuned for some EXO FICS - a super depressing exo-m fic and an au cowritten by me and my sister!

Speaking of my sister, many many thanks to her for being the real mvp and editing this!!!

Feedback and comments are always appreciated and welcome. Thank you all for reading! Enjoy! :)

(Crossposted from my AO3 account.)

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chika1611 #1
Chapter 1: I'm a sap for jjp family au, especially cutie baby youngjae <3
this is too cute, I can't help but smiling all the time <3
bright16 #2
Chapter 1: THIS IS REALLY CUUUTEE, I CANT HELP TO SMILE OR GIGGLE xD
anpanman_bae #3
Chapter 1: beautifully written <3
thank you so much!
ayelamarthy #4
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Soooo cute! I’m reading this at like 1 in the morning and I’m still laughing at the cute jokes and fangirling hard. Good Job! This was really good writing!
RatedMe #5
Chapter 1: This has to be the first JJProject familyau I've ever read and I kept the tab open on this story waiting to comment on it for so long because I loved it so much. Jinyoungie, Jaebum and Youngjae make the perfect trio, the perfect family. I loved all of their interactions and moments together. Not to mention Mark, Jackson, Yugyeom and Bambam whose moments were both cute and funny. You're initial description of Jinyoung was beautiful and I loved the last part when you mentioned how many letters each name shared, it was so adorable. Overall I adored this story, thank you so much for writing it.
CacaKwon #6
Chapter 1: YOURE MY FAVOURITE SRSLY
jjpforever #7
Chapter 1: It's super cute storyyyyyyy...
I feel like i smile like crazy from the begining the story till the end :")
Thankyou for making this story, authorniiimm... :*
ivytlz #8
awww I really liked this! youngjae is adorable (and let's face it, it's like he's meant to be their child, even their names fit well: JinYoungJaeBum) and domestic JJP fluff is always much loved :)
great job! I can't wait to read more of your work!
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