--purpleberry's Wonderland [Open!]

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--purpleberry's Wonderland(: 

Status : Taking Request

Looking for an honest review? An advertisements to grab the readers attention? Or even a dream one-shot with your ultimate bias/pairings? Well, you came by the right place my dear AFF users!

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  • I will not review stories that are more than 30 chapters. 
  • I'm open to ual fics. Which means that I'll accept [light] s. No hardcore s. I can't take it.
  • I can read/write  and yuri but please, don't be so hardcore. 
  • Do not bash me up. I'm the only one working here so I would appreciate if you kindly wait. I've a life too(: 
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  • I will only accept 3 reviews, 6 ads and 4 one-shots request per week. Reviews are done around 2 weeks or so, ads within a day or two and one-shots at least a week. 
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 Da Reviewer

--Am I a strict reviewer?

  • No, I'm not a strict reviewer. I will definetly give my honest opinions but, I'm not strict. Base on points [If the story is lame-ish], the lowest I'll give is 45/115. Not lower than that. 

--Am I a Grammer Nazi?

  • Oh, I'm not a grammer nazi! I don't really like pointing out grammatical errors. But, I can be a grammar nazi if you appoint me to(:

--What kind of reviewer am I?

  • Honestly, I don't know. I'm not strict but sometimes, I can be really harsh. If you want me to review you stories strictly, I can do that! So, I'm mixed. If English is not your first language, I will never be harsh on you(: I give my honest opinions [always does]. Don't like my type of reviews than, I think you're searching for the wrong person.

--What genre are you best at?

  • Me? I love reading romance and fluff stuffs. I don't really like reading sad sad stories. But, I can read anything. , yes! But, I can't read that hardcore(:

Da Rubric 

Title : [5 points]

Is the title related to your story? Is it interesting/eye catching?

Poster + Background (Apperance) : [10 points]

5 each. How is the poster well matched with the story? Is the fonts use alright? Does it relate to the story? No poster or background, it won't affect your points.

Description + Foreword + Plot : [25 points]

Is the description alright? Do you reveal too much information? Is the foreword too boring?

Flow : [10 points]

Is the flow too fast or too slow. Does every chapter explains everything clearly?

Characteristic : [15 points]

Is the character fully explained? Is it revealing too much for the story? Was it enough?

Grammar + Spellings : [20 points]

I'm not really strict in this. Plus, I won't list down your mistakes. If you want me to, just say so. If you want me to be strict, just tell me(:

Originality : [10 points]

Is this another cliche story? Or, is this the best original story ever?

Ending : [10 points]

How well is the ending. If there's no ending (which means on-going fic) this won't be affected.

Enjoyment + bonus : [10 points]

Comments :

My final comments about your fic.

Total : [115 points]

Updates 

23/01/12 --> Yeah! Got 3 request! I'm so happy! I'll try to finish them up ASAP(: Keep the request coming and I love you guys~!

Foreword

Da Forms 

Da Status

--Pending

23/01/12 | BabyChoco [One-shot]

23/01/12 | nanie92 [One-shot]

23/01/12 | byungari [Review]

23/01/12 | jiyeonsboy [Review] 

--Completed

23/01/12 | joanne200969 [Chapter 1]  

Da Ways

[One-Shot] Chap 1 - Cheesy Lyrics

Chunji decides to confess to Seomin by writting her a very cheesy lyric(s) song, and singing it to her on her birthday.

 

Thank you Latienza from Ah-mazingly Graphic Request Shop for the poster! I love it^^

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--jieun #1
*AFF Username + Link : --jieun // http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/126967

*Story Title : ❝ .Marshmallow Roleplay. ❞

*Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/156423

Genre(s) of story : Roleplay

*Synopsis :

Ever wanted to roleplay your favorite idol?
Well come in and join m a r s h m a l l o w roleplay !
What are you waiting for? Join Now!
.or it's too late.
- - -
{ Takes on aff only. }

*Character(s) : Anybody ! :D

*Rated? : Yes !

[If answered yes] What type of pairing(s) are there? : & Yuri :]

Comments : THANK YOU <3

*Code : OnlyHaeandKyu
uchiha-sama #2
*AFF Username + Link : KeyBabyy (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/19329) & LeeSkye06 (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/83875)

*Story Title : The Purity Mourners

*Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/139739/the-purity-mourners-fantasy-magic-shinee-snsd-superjunior-bap

Genre(s) of story : Fantasy, Action, Romance, Tragedy, Adventure

*Synopsis : Skye and Storm, although they seem like the average pair of young adults, they've actually been around for over a century, almost two. They are Mages part of one of the most Elite clans called the Purity Mourners. With the Second Great Mage War over, the stakes are higher when a group of Mages, their identities unknown to the public, begin to summon Demons who are attacking not only Mages but Mundanes as well. Between all of this Mage and Demon business, where does hit boyband SHINee fit in? And why do they need to be kidnapped?

*Character(s) : Lee Yunji/Skye | Seo Chaehee/Storm | SHINee | B.A.P | Super Junior | SNSD | Ulzzangs | T-ara & more. There will be many idols, actors, etc...featured.

*Rated? : Some chapters are rated M but purely for blood and violence. Maybe soft but not full out get-in-my-pants .

What type of pairing(s) are there? : Neither nor Yuri, I apologize to those who wanted it.

Comments : LOL I love your poster! Kyuhyun & Donghae are so cute!!! And well, yeah I really hope for some readers (:

*Code : OnlyHaeandKyu
SweetMemoriesForever #3
[One-shots]

*AFF Username : SweetMemoriesForever

Title of story : I will never let go of you

*Genre(s) : Romance, fluff,

*Character(s) : Lee Donghae (Super Junior) Sung JaeHye (OC)

*Plot : They have been friends for as long as they could remember, and recently Donghae has been acting strange. He has been flirting more, but JaeHye doesn't notice. Until he confesses and everything is turned from friends, to lovers.

Ending : Just want him to tell her he is in love with her and he never wants to let her go and then ^^

*Code : OnlyHaeandKyu

Comments : Please let me in! >.<

*Rated : Yes please!

[If yes] What type of pairing(s) :Straight, I don't like or Yuri :/

Any requested scenes to be in it? : Just the scene ;) Sorry, I'm so dirty minded!
KooJaehee #4
[One-shots]

*AFF Username :cutecat

Title of story :Yeah.. That my horney husband.

*Genre(s) :Romance,romantic

*Character(s) : Yong JunHyung (B2st) and OC (Lee Sunny)

*Plot : it about arrange marriend with junhyung and she already have boyfriend but a same time he don't know junhyung and hyunseung are kpop idol becouse she really hate Kpop.
*Ending :happy with junhyung and her Hyunseung with hyuna.

*Code : OnlyHaeandKyu

Comments :hope u accept my req ^

*Rated :nope

[If yes] What type of pairing(s) : (? Yuri?)

Any requested scenes to be in it? :bed scene
Secretmoonlight #5
AD! :)

*AFF Username + Link : secretmoonlight (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/53753)

*Story Title : ♦♢ⓖⓤⓔⓢⓢ ⓦⓗⓞ: the game show!♢♦

*Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/134315/the-game-show-under-construction-comedy-game-korean-kpop-sungyeol-you-eunji

Genre(s) of story : It's a game show in story format :3

*Synopsis : Guess Who: the game show is the newest story-based game where you can test to see your true k-pop knowledge. Hosted by APink's Jung Eunji and Infinite's Lee Sungyeol, you will be able to guess pictures of and fun facts about your favorite idols! Bonus: Karma prizes are up for the winners! We haven't started quite yet, so you still have the chance to play!

*Character(s) : YOU! Other users, Eunji, Sungyeol (your hosts), and k-pop idols!

*Rated? : Nope!

Comments : This will be a fun and interactive game where you can even win some karma prizes :3 Come and play with other users! Think you're a true fan? Well let's put you all to the test!~

*Code : OnlyHaeandKyu

Thank you thank you thank you in advance :D!
_Kawahiro_ #6
ONESHOT

AFF Username : _Kawahiro_

Title of story : Cheesy Lyrics

*Genre(s) : Fluff, Romance

*Character(s) : Cho KyuHyun (Super Junior) and Lee Sora (OC)

*Plot : KyuHyun and Sora have known each other since high school and have been best friends since. Reality is, Sora loves Kyuhyun. Finally she gets the nerve to tell her friend.

Ending : KyuHyun Admits that he has loved her for a long time now also, he was just sure she liked EunHyuk. They get together.

*Code : Haeis--purpleberry'shusband

Comments : OC Info:
My OC:
Name: Lee Sora
Age: 27
Personality: Sweet and Charming, Smart and Diligent, Sarcastic and Cocky, Easily annoyed and Clumsy and lastly Humorous.
Looks:
http://i1135.photobucket.com/albums/m635/himehehe12/Sora.jpg

*Rated : Nope

Any requested scenes to be in it? : N/A ^^
sailorroxy #7
[One-shots]

*AFF Username: sailorroxy

Title of story: Always there

*Genre(s): Romance

*Character(s): Rachel Porter (OC) and Henry Lau (Super Junior M)

*Plot : Rachel age 20 has enjoyed her life for the past year or at least that’s what she tries to tell herself everyday when she goes to work at the café in the morning or the grocery store in the evenings. She tries to convince herself that she is happy making barely above minimum wage at two jobs that she uses to pay for University and her bills. She tries to convince herself she is okay when ever Super Junior M comes on the television. And she tries not to spend the money that comes in the mail from a mysterious benefactor even though she will if she really needs it. You see once upon a time Rachel was in a relationship and deeply in love with Henry Lau of Suju M (Who loved her more then anything.) But a year ago tragedy struck the couple (maybe a miscarriage) and she ended their relationship saying she needed to know who she was without him.

She hasn’t spoken to him sense. On her day off she was heading to the library and coninsidently super junior M was having a fan meeting and Henry saw her pass by and panicked and had a security guard or a manager follow her to where ever she was going and give him up dates.

Ending: Henry ‘kidnaps’ her from the library and takes her to their special place. They talk and he tells her he was the one sending her money because he just doesn’t know how not to love her and want to take care of her. End it with a news article labled ‘HENRY LAU OF SUPER JUNIOR M DATING’ With a picture of Him kissing her.

*Code: OnlyHaeandKyu

Comments: She lives in China for university but is White and American so her and Henry spoke English a lot.

*Rated: Kinda just have it say in the past they did partake in ual realations.

[If yes] What type of pairing(s): (? Yuri?)

Any requested scenes to be in it? : A flash back
Lady_Mitsuki #8
[Reviews]

*AFF Username + Link : Lady_Mitsuki (http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/32930)

*Story Title : A Surprising Birthday

*Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/132835/a-surprising-birthday-jaejoong-junsu-jyj-yoochun-birthday

Comments : (Is English your first language?) No, it isn't. Also, I wrote it today, and Im waiting for the poster of it... But Luckily i will have it before you review it ;)

Characters : Jaejoong, Junsu, Yoochun

*Rated? : No

*Completed or On-going? : Completed.

*Code : (should know by reading the rules) OnlyHaeAndKyu

*Notify By : (after the review is done, should I PM you, wall you, story comment?) PM :)
Seo_AegyoPrincess #9
Nice one-shot (: LOL, I'm just stopping by and reading the Cheesy Lyrics one-shot. How funny is Chunji's confession. A fart upon saying my true feelings for you. Is smells badly. This makes me laugh so bad. LOLOLOL!! Plus, Chunji's pic! Ahhhh! Shall request soon ~!
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