Chapter 1: This is so incredibly beautiful. Ok, I don't think I have read any short story like this that has ever touched me this much. It has such a beautiful message and it's really well written. I really liked this, it feels very special. Also I like how you describe things, the atmosphere feels so light, so soothing to me. And the way you said that there was a light inside of him and the jack-o-lantern reference, this was really good. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story, I love it so much ❤❤❤

Chapter 1: A story giving strength to those in need.... Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!

Chapter 1: I'm crying right now... This is so beautiful

Chapter 1: This was just beautiful!

Chapter 1: I really hope u write a complete version of this...so many questions are in my head...if not then please don’t delete it...the words baek said to ueol really touched me on a personnal level and I hope other people get to read this.
Thank u ^_^

i love it. i hope with everything in me that you’ll write more. who is baekhyun to chanyeol? is baekhyun a real person or someone chanyeol imagined? maybe he didn’t imagine it and baekhyun isn’t human at all. i want to know what chanyeol is going to do next. i want to know of his past and how truly alone he is.
i imagine the place chanyeol’s living in to be gloomy and gray even if the sun is shining. as someone who has lived with mdd for a very long time i sympathize greatly. i hope chanyeol finds his happiness. after all words are just words. only you can help yourself and change your life for the better.
please don’t delete this story!
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also the whole stars and universe part reminds me of katrina the fortune teller in animal crossing when she reads your fortune haha like this :
https://i.imgur.com/aUy4VUo.png