Chapter 5: Your choice of the names is pretty cool. I laughed so hard when I read Jins name because it just fits him so perfectly xxD
I like the chat style for a story because it is a nice change to all those text walls. Although you're not putting too much descriptions and such into the story (how will you even, it's a chat style), you are creating an interesting mini drama that is very fun to read :)
It's kind of unclear to me why Jimin picked Yoongi of all people to invite into a private chat. I mean, they didn't really exchange much words before, so it just seems that their story is unnaturally fast... No offense though ;)
I'm also really curious of whom exacty are those seven fanboys of and who they are using as profile pictures ;)
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