Chapter 1: Hey hey, I read this one a while ago, but didn’t leave a comment back then. So, that needed to be changed! This piece is one of the saddest I’ve ever read, in a good way. The way you captured the desperation, helplessness and fear in both characters is astonishing. I went through similar things and lost a dear friend a year ago and the emotions feel very relatable. Maybe I didn’t comment back then because they were so raw then. Raw, that word sums it up pretty well, I think. But you didn’t make it overly dramatic, which makes this story believable. The simplicity with which you convey your characters’ feelings and still make them powerful at the same time shows that you’re an amazing writer.
Chapter 1: I’m re-reading this again and wow is it just as beautiful as the first time you showed it to me. It’s just like it’s “angst” sure, but you really captured the feeling of depression and I just think that this is some of your strongest writing still.
Chapter 1: This was so sad, I felt definitely very emotional reading this. I'm glad it ended on a positive note though, with jeti moving forward together. It was a good read though
This is beautiful. This means a lot to me. I am tiffany though I don’t have a Jessica. Having someone to encourage you to move forward must be really blessed.
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