Chapter 6: Honestly i was going to comment like 2 weeks ago but then the internet broke down and i lost this fanfic and found it again now. So, i think this story has a lot of potential and the storyline seems interesting. There's some typos and grammar errors but those shouldn't be hard to fix. The text is a bit stiff sometimes but if you keep writing it should get better. I really like this tho so i hope you'll keep writing this. Idk if this was helpful probs not but yea... I'll stay tuned :)

It‘s a really good story so far, I like it :)