Dead Leaves

Description

Yoongi wanted to spend his entire life with Hoseok – but life had other, much sadder plans.

Foreword

This is the first Yoonseok oneshot I've written – I wrote it for a Sope fanfiction challenge sometime back and wanted to share it here as well~

Comments and feedback are most welcome!^

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sodaberry118 #1
Chapter 1: Why did I read this when I'm in the office??
Anyway, it's beautifully sad. TT
glittery #2
Chapter 1: Ahhh! I like this because it was beautiful and short, which counteracts the sadness. If it was longer, it would have made me cry more which would make me hate you (in the nicest way possible).
2-get-her #3
Chapter 1: Man, I'm such a sensitive person this literally broke my heart, there were some things about the writing that bothered me a little, but I'm just nitpicking tbh.

During some of the dialogue, it was kind of difficult to tell who was talking when I did eventually catch onto it though. And the switching from calling Hoseok J-hope and Yoongi Suga kinda bothered me a little.

But this is still really good, I'm just nitpicking a lil so don't pay it too much attention ^^
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