Act VII

The Nutcracker Gone Wrong
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

 

 

 

 

Amber honestly didn’t know what to do anymore. They were roaming the halls of the castle, but she didn’t really know what to look for anymore. Yeah, they needed that scepter (or so she thought; it made sense), but what about after?

 

Hakyeon seemed to sense something was wrong, and looked over at the young woman by his side.

 

“You are uncertain as to what will happen next, are you not?” he asked.

 

Amber hummed, before replying, “To be quite honest, yeah. I mean, what do we do after we’ve got the scepter? That’s the thing that shrunk me, so it should make me big again, but how do I get home?”

 

Hakyeon let this question simmer for a bit before saying, “I still believe that the Sugar Plum Fairy is the one who will aid us in our quests. Perhaps the scepter will indeed help, but I suspect that she is the one to help you find your way home.”

 

Amber paused, thinking it over. Perhaps he was right, but that also meant that they would have to go on a quest to find her. She didn’t want to spend time doing that. Not when they were already at the heart of the enemy’s lair.

 

Relenting, she asked, “Do you have any clues about where she could be? We can’t just search blindly. If you’ve been searching for her, someone must have told you something.”

 

Hakyeon looked down. “She was the ruler of the Land of Sweets, but the Land of Sweets was destroyed by the mouse king once he took over the kingdom. She went into hiding, and no one has heard from her for years. I’d heard rumors that her cavalier had recently emerged, so if we were to find him, perhaps he could lead us to her.”

 

“Great! So then where is this cavalier?” she demanded.

 

“I… do not know. The last I heard he was in a land far away, and when I ventured there, it turned out to be your land. I found no traces when I was there. It became a dead end.” The resignation was clear on his face.

 

Amber groaned in frustration.

 

They turned a corner, and suddenly she was pushed back and up against the wall by Hakyeon, who pressed himself close to her.

 

A moment later she heard why: a group of mice soldiers stomped down the stairs just around the corner. Amber peaked around the corner, and her eyes widened when she saw the chained figure standing in the middle. The young man looked worse for wear, his whole face bruised and bloodied. He barely supported himself as the mice dragged him along. His legs finally gave out behind him, and he collapsed to the ground, causing the entire troop to come to a halt.

 

The mouse leading the soldiers turned around in annoyance.

 

“Hurry it up! His Majesty said this one was to be put in maximum security immediately,” he ordered, disdain lacing his words.

 

He his heel and kept walking. The soldiers hoisted the young man up, physically dragging his unconscious body behind them.

 

Amber looked up at the nutcracker, the horror in her eyes clear. However, she was surprised to see that instead of the same horror, his expression was one of deep thought.

 

“Is something the matter?” she asked hesitantly.

 

“It is curious that the young man is still alive. The mouse king likes to transform disobedient subjects into inanimate objects, so for this one to still be human…” he trailed off, lost in thought.

 

Amber immediately understood his train of thought. “He has information that the mouse king needs,” she finished. He nodded.

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Amalya
#1
Chapter 14: First of all, my abundant apologies for getting to this so very late. I think I honestly stopped visiting the site shortly after the contest and yeah... That's no excuse and I'm back now (for now anyway) so here goes!

I really did enjoy this. It was certainly unique and you made me laugh more often than I anticipated. Punching the Mouse King in the nose was hilarious. XD And I was additionally delighted by all the characters you used. It was fun seeing familiar faces and discovering how they were all connected. heh The intermissions were a neat touch as well and I like the idea of a storyteller trying to keep things on track and then eventually having to give up in favor of a new alternative. Quite amusing, I assure you.

I also found myself wanting for more details or more information, but the very lack of those bits and pieces made the story move quite quickly. Not a bad thing in this case. It was like a roller coaster ride where the build up is the trip to the top and then it doesn't stop until you get back to the station. The time jumps were nice too and that also carried the story forward without having to spend too much time on detail and description.

I felt a little bit bad for Yongguk (and Amber) at the very end there, but then he called his 'friend' and all was well again. haha Touche and well done. Thank you again for writing this and once more, I'm so very sorry it took me this long to read and respond. I do believe this is my first Hakyeon and Amber story and I'm quite happy with it. :D
boffin
#2
cant wait to start reading this fic
troll_
#3
Chapter 14: Absolutely loved your spin on the nutcracker! Is there any chance that we might get a sequel? Loved the story! Great job author!
Amalya
#4
Holy crap! I haven't gotten around to reading it yet but I'm blown away by the fact that there are 14 chapters. O.o Thank you in advance and I very much look forward to checking this out! :D Sounds quite intriguing. haha