Arrows and Ashes

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Baekhyun's whole world goes up in flames. Rewritten. 

Foreword

After being isolated and feared for his gifts, Baekhyun transfers to a new school as a normal kid. He soon discovers the gifted boys here are the reason that the gifted are terrified by the general population. 

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Yaone_L #1
Chapter 7: Ooh, Lay's character is an interesting one. Cant wait to see. More manipulation happening. And i wonder who is the next "gifted" Baekhyun will meet? Great writing.
kazue1827 #2
Chapter 5: The first plot is good but this version is also really interesting!
kashycat #3
Chapter 5: Ahh I really liked the first plot, but after reading the prologue/first chapter here I think I really like this too! ^.^

Gosh, till now Chanyeol, Junmyeon, Tao and Luhan seem to be complete idiots, to say it nicely.

Lay seems quite alright ^.^

I wonder though how Baekhyun will come into more contact with them - through music class, maybe ?
queenmewh #4
i liked the first plot but this one is as interesting. wow exo are brats lmao. thank you so much for sharing! :)
kashycat #5
Chapter 3: So, like, who's dumb here, the "boy" or the men. Gosh. They really think the girl is the one with the power. I'm pretty sure it's Baekhyun, who still has no idea of his power. On the other hand it's understandaböe that they think it's the girl, after all she's younger - more possible for her to have gotten it even though that's already late.

Ah and the poor man TT honestly I hope something can be done there D: Till now I just think Chanyeol's cruel, gosh.

I wonder how he and Baekhyun will really meet the first time and how all of this will play out
kazue1827 #6
Chapter 2: I had a feeling that Baekhyun had just managed to awaken his 'gift' or it could be Chanyeol intercepting the battle cause Baek had caught his interest!
kashycat #7
Chapter 2: Ugh I swear I was so annoyed by the woman at the beginning and the guard who dragged out the girl, they were so arrogant and just ugh

And these fights really do seem barbaric D:

And Baekhyun protecting that poir girl, Ah gosh TT
I wonder if it'll have any impact on his ranking ? Ah but I think not xD but maaybe someone watched and started being interested, who knows....

And I do wonder how Baekhyuns and Chanyeols first meeting will be; Chanyeol is a ten (If he's indeed the one that was challenged at the veginning x)) so I really wonder if he'll be like the guard or woman


I was really looking forward to an update from this story x) Ahh I swear I just love the plot
kashycat #8
Chapter 1: Ah gosh Baekhyunie TT

You have me really curious about whats gonna happen now xD

Ahh I so cant wait for the next chapter(s)!!! (Please dont take this as pressuring or anything I just want to say I'm looking forward to iiit >.<)

and I'll try to make longer comments on the next chapter!
kashycat #9
Oh my gosh this sounds so promising I'm so looking forward to this!!
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