At Sixteen

Description

A short one-shot of Minhyun x Original character

Foreword

My ult is Kang Daniel but Hwang Minhyun is my religion. jk!

Haha Minhyun is such a sweet kid and he's been serving looks that had me shaken. Haha this girlie right here is barely holding on from swerving lanes hahaha anyway, just testing the waters with this oneshot.

I will probably make a longer version of this one. Like putting chapters because I want to suffer haha

I hope you have a good read!

 

 

PS. I am still a rookie so please comment down below your thoughts on this story. Like which part I need to improve and such :) I'm accepting "healthy" criticisms hehe

 

Thank you!! :)

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watercherry #1
Chapter 1: The plot itself is short and simple. I like that a lot. ^^ One thing that bothered me the most are your commas. You had some placed where you didn't need them. Other than that, great job! Keep writing, and one day, you'll be even better at writing. ^^
Park_HyeSun #2
Chapter 1: Hello, the story is simple and decent. If you want some constructive pointers, here they are:
- you made a few typos (loght --> light, heaing --> hearing)
- you missed out on a few punctuation marks throughout the story

That's what I can see from the first read. Keep writing and improving! I'm sure that you can do it. (:
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