Now she’s my rival

My First and Only Love

 

*Hye Ri POV*

“Hyun Joong oppa! How dare you!” I yelled.

“What did I do?” He asked.

“You confess your feeling to Je Sup and dated with her right!” I yelled.

“So what’s the problem with you?” He asked.

“If you still want to see her smile, you better leave her and come back to me, or not I’ll never let her go, I’ll make her suffer!” I yelled.

“What did you say!” He yelled back.

“I’LL MAKE HER SUFFER!” I yelled.

“What did she do to you?!” He yelled back.

“WHAT DID SHE DO? SHE STOLE YOU FROM ME!” I began to cry.

“Hye Ri! What are you thinking? We broke up because of your parents and before we even met her, we broke up not because of her!” He explained.
“I don’t care!” I yelled.

“What do you are thinking of?” He said.

Suddenly I saw Je Sup passing by, I got a chance to make her relationship and Hyun Joong oppa’s relationship broken.

“Oppa, if you want me to forgive her, be with me and kiss me now!” I said in a smaller voice to prevent Je Sup hearing my words. Hyun Joong oppa pulled me and kissed me. I peeped out, but there was no one.Hyun Joong oppa directly walked away.

“Oppa!” I yelled, he didn’t mind and just walked away.

*Hye Ri POV end*

*Kyu Jong POV*

I was walking on the street, and I saw Je Sup walking in the rain without any umbrella. I directly ran to her.

"Je Sup! what are you doing here?" I asked while covering her with my umbrella. She did not respond my call. I took off my jacket and weared it to her. Then suddenly she fell down. She fainted. I directly brought her to my house.

===The next morning===

"Je Sup?" I asked her when she start to open her eyes.

"What happen?" She asked.

"You fainted from last night." I replied

"Fainted?" She asked while holding her head looks like it is painful.

"Are you okay now?" I asked her

"I'm okay now" She smiled and I smiled back.

*Kyu Jong POV end*

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madesunre #1
I love it!
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#2
Chapter 10: ahhh. this is so cute.
Missdreamgirl501
#3
a thumb up for unnie ^^
NinjaAsian
#4
nice one and i think you should do a one really tragic =)
Vanessawiliam501 #5
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Vanessawiliam501 #6

Anyeong! Announcement, hahaha, I've made a new fanfic, the title is "The Forgotten" here's the link ^^ http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/22078<;br />
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Ntxhee #7
That was an AWESOME SS501 fanfic! :D<br />
Hope you continue to write more!(:<br />
Vanessawiliam501 #8
Thank you for the comments, I'm making another one, stay tuned! I'm updating it, hahaha ^^
kpopfan4life
#9
OMG, I LOVED this story! Hope you make another one!!!:D
Vanessawiliam501 #10
Thanks 4 the comment, I'll make another one ^^