Chapter 1: Wow! This was such a nice read and I didn't needed to read the first part to understand what was going on. Props for that! Keep up the good writing ^^

Chapter 1: here comes the scream. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. and tears of mixed emotions. AHDHDJSKKSPWKSKSNXBJSSJ. I thought I've moved on from the fic then I read this and BAM all hell breaks loose and the fic comes back to me. I'm really ecstatic you wrote Yifan's POV because even though I know Yixing was hurting and not well, Yifan must have been too. Probably even carrying the burden of survivor's guilt considering he's one of the higher ranks who got away safely during the chaos. And to actually read it I'm just....... *stabs heart furiously* istg my eyes were leaking the whole time, especially after Yifan bid Luhan goodbye, and he thought Tao was dead for good, and my eyes just went oh might as well keep pushing water out the boat its overfilled anyway. And then there's that talk with Tao in the restaurant, the way you wrote Yifan's fury and pent-up emotions was so raw it hurts me :( (but don't get me wrong!! it only means you're good at what you're doing huhu) my heart also skipped a beat when yifan still refer to yixing as his boyfriend agshskslsks cavity aside, i think it took a great deal of courage for yifan to actually call yixing as his boyfriend especially after what tao has been telling him :')

i'm rambling but i have to!! moving on to yifan's urgency after hearing yixing is coming to hk, i love the whole scene so so much it felt a lot like i was watching a movie!!! my heart shriveled involuntarily when yifan said something along the line the universe is not letting them be together like no no no no no ge just no. and then there's my heroin the doctor--journalist!! i don't think i got to tell you how much i love her character so i'm telling you now!! i absolutely love her character so freaking much i can't even decide where to start with her but i just love her, she's brilliant. finally, fanxing just being cuddly and cute!!!! there's still the underlying angst but they're! trying!! and i just immediately perish because loves, after all the you two went through together and separately, you deserve all the good things the world has to offer.

um well i think this ends my rambling, i'm so sorry it's too long i doubt it's even comprehensible ahdksksksjs i just love this so much, thank you <3