Goodbye

Description

Donghae promised. Eunhyuk belived. But then again, he broke those promises.

Foreword

He promised

to take care of me

to love only me

to take care of my heart

But he lied.

He begged for forgiveness.

promised not to do it again

I forgave him

'cause I love him so much

But guess what?

He did it again.

He lied to me again.

This time, i just can't.....

 

 

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this is my first time writing a fanfic... hehehe! ^^ 

i sacrificed not listening on two of my lectures to write this fic...  and i hope it's worth it.. ^^

please be easy on me.. english isn't my first language.. so please correct me if i made some mistakes on the grammar.. 

please do comment... i'll be really happy! :D 

 

BTW, this is in hyuk's POV.

 

Hope you'll like it! 

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briellamarie
#1
Chapter 1: why so short??!! (pout)
sayheyhyukjae #2
;AAAA; HAE!! YOU BABO! HOW COULD YOU!
YOUR OWN POOR HYUKJAE! >.<

this is heartbreaking </3
EunHaeOnly
#3
huwaaa.. so sad :(
ELFkatemarie #4
eunhae...
aww so sweet..
angiie #5
omg.!!! sequel..!!
2min---Replay
#6
A few spelling errors, but that's probably because you were typing too quickly... I BLAME YOU'RE KEYBOARD THINGY!!!! But will you please do a sequel????? •.•
deedee2011
#7
Erh..seriously,how can Donghae just turned his back and walk away like nothing happen? Why didn't he hold Hyukkie tighter? :/
KpopLove143
#8
Omo~ LEE DONGHAE. HOW COULD YOU?
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO YOUR HUBBY?
WAE? O3O
lee_hyukhae
#9
Cliffhanger!! ~~
me want moooooooreeee... xDDDDDD
yuesanmeiko87
#10
last time nga nagbasa ko kay each other ra man ang mali.. hahaha.. nice story, btw.<br />